Reviews for Ravens
Alley cat gray chapter 4 . 6/8/2017
Sequel please
skkmgirl818 chapter 4 . 6/10/2014
That was fast
skkmgirl818 chapter 2 . 6/10/2014
I love how Alice and Jasper seemed to play a major role
skkmgirl818 chapter 1 . 6/10/2014
oh god the heartbreak
PrincessLiya chapter 4 . 6/2/2014
More please
Guest chapter 4 . 6/27/2013
loved it
Guest chapter 4 . 4/1/2013
Aww you should write a sequel about their family life together 3
Guest chapter 4 . 2/9/2013
''me reading the ending''
-Oh, Bitch Please!-
Valentina Alexandrea Sparrow chapter 4 . 12/13/2012
Cute more please or is that it?
FrostedDiamond chapter 4 . 6/10/2011
i love this
LunaticV chapter 1 . 2/11/2011
hmm, a little fast-pavced and cliche but i love the angst and hurt
iheartgaympreg chapter 4 . 8/20/2010
you should write a sequeall :D
mssmith chapter 4 . 8/16/2010
Hardly any story at all...you could've done this as a one shot and done without all the song and it might've been a little more interesting. You write ok, but you rely too much on filling up a chapter with songs to have kept my interest. After the first chapter and the long-assed song, I no longer even cared about the characters. Thanks for trying, now try it without all the song filling it up and it will be better than ok.
sweetteatwo chapter 4 . 8/2/2010
I liked what I have read in the first 4 chapters.

So please update so that I can find out what happens

When Jacob relizes that Edward is really there and would

Like to see him inter react and taking care of Bella's

Daughter since he will be her step parent should show Jacob

And Edwards oldest child bonding
ninalyta chapter 4 . 7/13/2010
the story is nice...

... BUT the end is really rushed. edward suddenly becoming all sweety and saying stuff like 'i love you' 'you can do anything with my life' is weird since at the beggining he hated jake...

i think you should have made a few more chapters before this end like he didn't want to go see jake and some time later he regrets because he thinks he died or something like that...
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