Reviews for 7 Things of Mikan Sakura
sOmEoNe chapter 1 . 3/31/2015
hahaha. ..like it.
funny!
Mimi145 chapter 1 . 2/15/2015
XD XD
Tokiya Nya chapter 1 . 7/16/2014
Love it!
SlightlyMindful chapter 1 . 3/7/2014
awesome
Kiki1770 chapter 1 . 2/20/2014
Bahahaha That was the greatest Miley Cyrus Parody I have ever read! Kudos to you!
AngelKitty27 chapter 1 . 1/27/2014
I LOVED IT!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
Sequel please!great story
silentreader53 chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
awww...so cute...:) :)
well written!
Ridley Silverlake chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
A simple plot that gets you guessing what happens in the end. Will Natsume catch her and act like it's a joke? Will he hurt Mikan's feelings when he gets the paper back? Will Mikan encourage his emotions towards her? Or could it go into a happy ending kind of thing where Natsume actually smiles as he runs after her? Who knows, and I guess that's up to the readers or you as the author to build up the ending of this story that won't look so much like a cliffhanger for some.

Short and simple sentences are much better than long ones, so thumbs up on that! :) With the way you write your dialogues and narrations, you are able to capture your readers into the story itself. If only the song didn't take up most of the space, but it IS a one-shot so that's not really something to comment on.

Keep writing! :)

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445Girl chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
Lol, cute :3
BrokenBlackCat chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
So cute and sweet I love it!
riinflorida chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
it so nice, but it disappoints me that natsume didn't tell mikan that he loves her, face to face. .
Arkytior's Song chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
KAWAIIII!
NxM chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
short but sweet! :) the song was really nice ;)
lol Bye Felicia chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
Short, simple, and sweet. Nice job.
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