Reviews for Old oneshot
Pheonix09 chapter 1 . 12/20/2014
That was awesome, cute and excellent, I loved it and nice job
I-Love-Trunks1 chapter 1 . 9/3/2014
I loved this story so much!
ZodiacAquarius chapter 1 . 8/12/2013
Awwwwww!
SCHWARZSCHILD chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
It's not really that bad.
In fact, is brilliant!
And Tai was not supposed to be eaten LOL
Stand bi me chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
Amusing read :)

Well described at the very begining too. I could just see it happening :)

You've got a few spelling mistakes that look like they originate from a language barrier.

Do you speak another language?

Either way, I liked this a lot. It was cute :D
Cleonhart chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
NU i thot it was aweosome! dude you should continue the story from there it would be a kick ass fic! i loved it GOOD JOB!
Miss-Stoneflower chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
I thought I didn't wanna read this because of the summary xD it was funny though it wasn't what I expected. It was cool
alexa-catta123 chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
It may be a strange story, but it is a good one.:D Congrats to your old, strange self.:D

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Moppy chapter 1 . 7/3/2009
you were so damn right saying we'd wanna read this LOL

welcome to fan girl land it's very... ... ... hormonally messed up LOL

*chucks you cookies* good fic~
Shelly21 chapter 1 . 7/3/2009
aww "chocolate boy" thats so cute :D

nice oneshot!