Reviews for Afterwards
M. S. Arora chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
Splendid work, Peladon! Definitely one of the best ‘close-to-deaths’ pieces I’ve read. The questions running through his mind were so profound and insightful. Your long, well punctuated sentences tidily managed to bring about the idea of time slowing down. The ending was particularly well done- the sudden change in sentence structure was really effective. Your words describing his introspection were very carefully chosen, especially when he contemplated the ‘moral pillars of his life’. Brilliant work!

Keep writing!

MsAurora
Jennifer Lynn Weston chapter 1 . 7/4/2009
Norrington came across to me as a man who thought things over, so this scenario seems really feasible. Poor man. :(

Fine vignette!