|Reviews for Hiding Hermione|
| Marivan chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
Clever and funny, this was quite an enjoyable little one-shot. Slughorn was quite amusing (if a bit disturbing) and I particularly loved Snape's cluelessness ("He hadn't actually considered that"). Perhaps the very last paragraph is a bit over-detailed - by removing the second sentence, I think it would be a stronger ending - but this is a very, very little thing, and the body of the story is very well crafted.
All in All, it was a wonderful story and a delight to read.
| nathy7 chapter 1 . 7/5/2009
petal? sluggy? you are so funny...I kept saying petal to myself to see if I could get over the "yuk" factor (my opinion not meant to offend) but violence seems to be the only answer to someone using it on me...
| Valmarien chapter 1 . 7/4/2009
"Petal" ? No wonder Hermione ran away as fast as she could... That was fun to read _
| Sampdoria chapter 1 . 7/4/2009
Well, for being a scheeming Slytherin, Severus was rather slow on the uptake, but when he finally catched up, he did so with style! Great story:-))
| LilacGrace444 chapter 1 . 7/3/2009
wonderful, is there more? cuz i was totally into that!
| notwritten chapter 1 . 7/3/2009
I have enjoyed this interesting reading today. Thank you for sharing it. Have a good weekend, and keep smiling. :-)
| AccioMuerta chapter 1 . 7/3/2009
Well done. Worth a laugh, certainly and I love how Slughorn thought Hermione meant him when she really meant dear old Sev. Especially love how she had came right out with who she meant, very Gryffindor of her.
| Imhilien chapter 1 . 7/3/2009
Nicely done... I'd be hiding from 'Sluggy' as well. Eww. :-p
| dedanaan chapter 1 . 7/3/2009
The man can be pretty obtuse when he wants to be. _
Yeuch... Sluggy? I'm creeped out... Thanks a lot. _
| natalie211 chapter 1 . 7/3/2009
Oh, I loved this! I must admit that I am a closet Hermione/Severus fan. And your story was among the top of the stories I have read for this pairing, writing- and plot-wise.
| Istani chapter 1 . 7/3/2009
“Shall I call him back and tell him we’ve split up?”
I think there's nothing more creepy than old walruss Sluggy lusting after you...
| mrscakeakajane chapter 1 . 7/3/2009
lol you gota love when Sev's dence, go hermione