Reviews for Unexpected
SomeStrangeDay chapter 4 . 8/30/2009
that was a really good chapter! i cant wait for the next one
pimpin-ett.fer-yuu chapter 2 . 7/18/2009
okie aso im alittle confused.. :/

are edward and all of them vampires?

cause blue and green eyes..

description helps alot,

knowing what bella knows helps some.

whether they are vampires or not.

yu cleaned up the second chapter a bit(:

well done(:
kookiewhore chapter 3 . 7/11/2009
This Story is getting so good! OMG i almost fell off my bed when bella said that mike was gay! im not a homophobe and that was just to funny! see this is why your a good writer, you throw in surprizes! im glad you introduced all the charicters by the 4th chapter:) Grandtastic! I Love It! Hehe Thankies For the credit it makes me feel all fuzzy inside! i will now give you a kookie so you can be a kookiewhore to! WO!

Your Faithful Reviewer and Hopefully Future Co Writer!

SomeStrangeDay chapter 3 . 7/11/2009
i love it, its so sweet! i cant wait for the next chapter.
Reigh Lyn chapter 2 . 7/9/2009
o, bella finally meets the new guy! (: update soon...
edwardcullenrox6201901 chapter 2 . 7/8/2009
i think, in my opinion, it would work if you continued the party a bit...including what happened to lauren jessica and rose, who else edward met, and so on...however, these are all things that can be discussed at school to. but if it was up to me, i'd do this at the party

i like your story. it looks interesting :D
kookiewhore chapter 2 . 7/8/2009
hehe i love bella's dry humor:) plus the thing about"edward's" jaw line was dead on! man dont you think that robert pattinson's jaw line is just so damn hot? hehe!


P.S please reply, it makes me think that the writer cares when they take the time to message back personaly. so yeah! i want to know what you thinkk of my review!
SomeStrangeDay chapter 1 . 7/3/2009
its really good! i cant wait for the next chapter!
pimpin-ett.fer-yuu chapter 1 . 7/3/2009
bella's personality is dead on..

for the most part..


the story is mixed up alot,

which is good.

change things up too much and readers will get confused.

watch out, keep it balanced.

cant wait to read more(:
Reigh Lyn chapter 1 . 7/3/2009
hey this seems pretty good... keep updating, can't wait for the next chapter (:
A is for Angel chapter 1 . 7/3/2009
love it so much:)