Reviews for Surprise!
ShuiHime chapter 6 . 1/7/2014
Great job! Write more stories like this!
Ashen Author chapter 5 . 3/19/2013
Very interesting. For lack of a nail (or two oranges). Definitely one of the more original ideas I've seen.
xSapphirexRosesxFanx chapter 6 . 7/30/2011
that was really funny! Usagi really suprised them and showed then that she's smart and sneeky.


keep the good work on.

boston chapter 6 . 7/6/2011
Sweet story. I love your ending!

Reminds me of another - Serena kept cutting her hair and the next day it would grow back. Very frustrating. I wonder what happened to that one...
mangamania chapter 5 . 11/3/2009
the luna pen right!

i so cant w8 4 the nxt chapter!
Luiz4200 chapter 5 . 11/2/2009
Please update. Sailor Moon and Tuxedo Kamen need to talk.
Amydali86 chapter 5 . 10/31/2009
Great story .It's very funny. lol.
Xapita chapter 5 . 10/31/2009
Usagi's hairtsyle trumps the danger element? Very cute story so far. Looking forward to more.
Curry Kitty chapter 5 . 10/31/2009
...she's naked...

I always thought the Scouts transforming would be a little distracting to their enemies (or anyone else around).

Brings a squeak from Motoki - HA!
Tiko 8 chapter 5 . 10/29/2009
Tightly written and fast-paced. Update soon!
Celeste-poet chapter 5 . 10/29/2009
1. Mamoru just totally blurted out his disguise like that to Motoki? I thought the rule was the Motoki wasn't supposed to know...but ah it's fiction, guess it doesn't matter.

2. Chapter 4 made me giggle. Very nicely done.

3. Looking forward to reading more.
Mockingbird Julia chapter 5 . 10/27/2009
Was that a pole-dancing fake Sailor Moon? Poor Motoki, enjoyably scarred for life.

I can't wait to hear Usagi's explanations. Oughtta be good.

Thanks for the update!
C. Jordan chapter 5 . 10/27/2009
All Motoki could manage was a squeak? Ha.

Cute chapter. I love the energy in this story.

- C. Jordan/Scrap Heap
Luna Goddess of the Night chapter 5 . 10/27/2009
haha, this was so funny so far! update soon! i am dying to see how mamoru confronts usagi. also, loved the youma. made me lol

AliceElizabeth2 chapter 5 . 10/26/2009
Haha! Thus was awesome! I really liked the ending, keep it up! Hope to see more

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