Reviews for Architects of Alteration
Kharlan Hero chapter 9 . 2/4/2013
Interesting story. :)

I've read a number of stories about the twins (considering they're my favorite characters), but never anything quite like this.

Poor Kaoru, only Haruhi noticed that he wasn't Hikaru.

And yes, Hikaru, your parents do have something they need to tell you.

Not sure what else to say, so on to the sequel. The story seemed somehow incomplete, so I went looking and was happy to find a sequel. :)
Heartnett chapter 9 . 3/2/2012
I love it! Like - I have no other words to describe what i feel. The ending... oh god! Just love it...
AL0LT0 chapter 9 . 3/1/2012
this story is AMAZING. I was a little confused in the beginning but everything fell together so perfectly... and the ending... perfect. absolutely perfect.
AnimeYaoiFangirl100 chapter 9 . 5/20/2011
I really enjoyed the story, but the ending was sad.
RAAAWWWEEE chapter 9 . 4/9/2010
wait what WHAT WHAT! THATS THE END IT CANT BE!

I WAS ENJOYING THIS TOO MUCH NO

I really really REALLY like this fic and I absolutely ADORED kyoya too!

FAVORITE FACORITE FAVORITE FAVORITE!
YagamiNeko chapter 9 . 2/14/2010
This is seriously such an addicting story! I think I read it in record time for me. P I saw the summary for the third story in this and knew that I just had to read it form the beginning! I'm so very glad I did! D

First, you write so dang good. No question about that. Your writing is 'could see it in my mind' worthy. Amazing job!

Second, I LOVE the plot! It's so original, and that you connected it to the actual anime but did some twists in there {like with the characters} Speaking of which, where was Tamaki? I gaped when I noticed {it took a long time} that he wasn't in it. PLEASE throw him in the sequel? *puppy eyes*

I think the ending killed me, because I was just begging for Hikaru to remember Kaoru. I thought he'd at least recognize his name from the past! DX But maybe it was just too traumatizing for him. ( The hug - ugh! SO sweet! At least they had their own little 'moment' in a long time. I really really really really really really REALLY just want them together again. T.T It was heartbreaking when Kaoru cried at the end. Made me almost cry from the tragicness-ness of it all. I feel so bad for their mother! Oh my gosh, the turmoil she's going through. SO SAD!

Great story so far! I can't wait to read the sequels! *squee* So many questions, so many things left unanswered, so much more to read! D

*ImAGayCatRaWr*
Flonniexd chapter 9 . 9/21/2009
Is there a sequal? OH PLEASE LET THERE BE A SEQUAL! IT WAS SO GOOD! seriously! I loved it! I love the father -son relationship between kyo and Kao! It was so sweet I just couldn't help but smile at every line! But YOU NEED TO HAVE A SEQAL! There are many unexplained bits in here! Like who is kyouya to Yuzuha and whats honey and Kyouyas relationship? what was the point of that swap? was it kinda like the movie 'parent trap'? I don't know. Why did kyouya become a mafia member? Why kidnap Kaoru in the first place? why get 'involved' with the hitachiins anyway? WHERES TAMAKI? So many questions, so few answers! This is WHY a sequal is needed.

THERE! I think I've proven my piont!

Great story! awesomely written! Lovely character relations! In character! Loving the realism! (simple things being thought through! -like where Kyo used the fake police badge to get guns through airport security! 3) GREAT STORY!

Love A fan,

FLONNIE XD
lolishotacon chapter 9 . 7/31/2009
Sad ending :(
Stephane Richer chapter 9 . 7/30/2009
That was an excellent ending to a great story...I only wish it could have been longer, because you write so well and I loved this story...*sniffs*

Anyhow, I liked how Hikaru and Kaoru had their brief parting hug. That was sweet.

What I don't get is the whole point of the switch...did Kaoru just want to see his biological family? Or did you explain earlier and did I forget because I have a horrible memory? I'm super sorry if that's the case...

Anyway, please continue writing for OHSHC!
Deekie chapter 9 . 7/30/2009
how is this finished? im depressed now! i wish there was more...
Livi-kunxXxChibi-chan chapter 9 . 7/30/2009
I love this story. It's very well written and the plot is really good. I was able to sympathize with both twins. This is very sad. I think you should do an epologe in which Kaoru and Hikaru meet one last time, when they are older. Just an idea. Keep writing!

-Chibi-chan
Stephane Richer chapter 8 . 7/28/2009
Boy is Hikaru dumb...

Ah, poor Kyoya. His dad is really evil, isn't he? I guess Kaoru understands how he feels, and Fuyumi too, but will anyone else understand plausibly? It'll take a hell of a lot for Hikaru to come around, anyway...
Stephane Richer chapter 7 . 7/25/2009
Well, if Kyoya was a junior in college (or high school, for that matter) when Kaoru was three, he actually is old enough to be his biological father. Just sayin.

But this was a good chapter, and the part about Kyoya stealing the pills was really funny.
lolishotacon chapter 6 . 7/23/2009
Wonder what will happen in the next chapter? Maybe the mom can tell the difference?
tebrighteyes chapter 6 . 7/22/2009
Wow I’m surprised you don’t have more reviews. This is amazingly addictive. Just one question: Wouldn’t Hikaru have recognized Kaoru’s name? Though I’m sure it’s all going to be explained. I feel sorry for Yuzuha. Awesome cliffhanger at the end I wasn’t expecting Hikaru to be kidnapped. Anyway please update soon. I need to know what happens next!
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