Reviews for Discovery
Fox Loves Shinigami chapter 4 . 9/26/2011
Aww that was soooo cute, awesome work. _ Ja.
spontaneous-rainbow chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
Yaoi-san- -_- Mmmm...dirty photos...can I get some?

Minty-chan- *rolls eyes* NO. Why would you?
Purple.Chocolate.Stars chapter 4 . 3/4/2010
AWW. Short and sweet (: But wearing each other's boxers could lead to something M-rated, don't you think? XD You know, the thought of Tory fucking Colin into every flat surface he can find reminds me of that story with them doing it in random places...which was also an awesome story~ So is this completed? I'll put it under alerts just in case :D
Purple.Chocolate.Stars chapter 3 . 3/4/2010
Damn the Doc for ruining their moment D: But the doctor thing made me chortle XD The -ahem- "injection" was probably the best part. And Colin insisting for another shower would be exactly what they need~

"So," said Tory, with a fierce grin. "Want to...cause some trouble?" By the way, that line was amazing.
Purple.Chocolate.Stars chapter 2 . 3/4/2010
Holy fuck. When I want to read about dirty photos you give me DIRTY PHOTOS O.O Seriously, I am completely FLOORED at how happy this made me.

Just SOME of my favourites would be the Dr. Pepper one (the internet is a dangerous place, isn't it? :D), Colin and his kitty, the ICE CUBE, the ICE CREAM (*resistance lost* Has he ever stuck a Popsicle up his ass...?), Colin's girly underwear( though I imagined it with the actual GIRL GIRLY ones with the cute ribbon and shit XD) and the wet dress shirt 8D Really, you covered so many kinks, it's just ridiculous XD

Now...I NEED TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER. Bu...I hope Tory will eventually be able to fuck Colin into every surface he can find ): I never imagined Dr. Garrat as such an ass...well, I'll try responding to your replies...soon XP
Purple.Chocolate.Stars chapter 1 . 3/3/2010

Whenever you mention a fic in your reply I'm faster to go read it then...well, Colin and Tory are to a closet XD I love hwo they ended up getting THE TALK together XD THat was simply adorable~ MAry gets like 94758438905789341 coolness points for being so understanding and awesome :D ...So did you write dirty photos yet? I feel like you've written everything I can think of 8D
Bandersnatch202 chapter 4 . 10/25/2009
And a nice sweet way to end the fic, with a smidge bit if implied smut but overall a very nice way to end it. personally I was hoping for a small confrontation with Tory's mom about the whole month of abstaining and her take on what they did during it instead, affirmation and acceptance that their love was real etc etc. BUT a nice bit of underwear swapping is just as good. Also nice to see development of the relationship between the Doc and Colin and Tory now that he is more directly involved.
Bandersnatch202 chapter 3 . 10/25/2009
Ah nice to see those two boys back together the way they love to be, naked hot sweaty and busy gettin it on! After the end to the last chapter it was very satisfying to see how they finally got their chance to be together again, and boy did they every take it heh. I was wondering if the Doc was gonna barge in on em, and I loved how suave Colin was with him, made him seem so cool and collected, and he acts like the total slut that he is! *chuckles* heh wanted to screw behind the amp.. ah beautiful images _
Bandersnatch202 chapter 2 . 10/25/2009
*shivers* so freaking hot

I love the way your twisted little mind works, this was quite possibly one of the hottest ideas I've ever heard of, and I just LOVE how into it Tory got, going all out for Colin, even though he really pissed him off day 1 hehe. I loved the slow sexy build up of emotion between the two caused by their lack of actually being able to have sex together, made for some touchingly sweet little scenes! And of course the ending was a jaw dropping damn near tear jerker of frustration! they had waited so long! and been so good! and now the Doc was gonna tear em apart a day before they could be together again? If I didn't already know what was gonna happen in the next chapter I'd be livid lol.
Bandersnatch202 chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
All I can say is God I Love Tory's Mom! This is just how I would envision her reacting to finding this all out, accepting but still a caring loving mother who is concerned for her son and his.. well to be honest her second son, cause that's totally how she treats Colin, like the second boy she never had. Good idea's on her part, and beautiful phrasing! However she left out key details in her rules.. oh loopholes! How we love you so haha!
wonder1440 chapter 4 . 7/19/2009
I love how they prepped the undies for each other So full of win!
Sammi chapter 4 . 7/16/2009
Aww, too short! But very sweet.
julia chapter 4 . 7/16/2009
Aw, that was so cute! Thank you for using my idea, and crediting me as well. _ Great job, as always.
ckhushrenada chapter 4 . 7/16/2009
awe...this was just so cute...lolzs
Sammi chapter 3 . 7/11/2009
The doctor caught them, haha! xD I can't wait for more!
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