Reviews for A Mirkwood Spider Landed On My Front Porch |
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![]() ![]() I'm sorry. I've been thinking about what I wrote and I realized that there was probably a more tactful and pleasant way of expressing it. It's true that I was surprised, but it's YOUR story, YOUR fantasy and YOUR right to write whatever you want. Though I don't take back my sentiment, I sincerely hope that you derive no insult from it. |
![]() ![]() Sorry to complain, but why isn't there a T rating? I thought it was just T because of the spiders. Look up Elvish customs on Wikipedia- Marriage and suchforth But I do like the Legolas and Gimli bickering. |
![]() ![]() Most stories THIS strange don't read very well. My pet plants and I, however, don't mind spiders and find this a very great story so far. :) Considering that I live in the dungeon and am quite... familiar... with spiders, I quite like this. (But you've traumatized my teddy bear!) Seriously, it's hilarious so far and I can't wait to read the rest, bedtime or not. |
![]() ![]() Wow. Just wow. Wargs like romance. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww...I adore Wargs too! When does a balrog show up? Please tell me there's a balrog! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww...I adore spiders, too. They creep me out, but I adore them anyhow. Which is why I'm reviewing, Legs, not because you threaten to eat me. I'm enjoying this so far! It's very funny! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved your story. It sounds like it was fun to write. |
![]() ![]() This was awesome! Totally original idea, I NEVER would have thought of something like that! Kudos for a job well done... now if you'll excuse me, I'm gonna go read the sequel! :) |
![]() ![]() Wow... just wow... |
![]() ![]() SERIOUSLY?! Who's next, Frodo? And I always knew Elves would be neat freaks |
![]() ![]() "... and that was how he became my favorite LOTR character" Hilarious! |
![]() ![]() Wow... a WARG that is totally romantic?! That is so cool! (And a nice twist) :) |
![]() ![]() No, stay away Legs! Ok ok I'm reviewing! This is an awesome story so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() Overall, this is a good story. Legolas and Gimli can never seem to stop bickering, even though I thought they did after they became friends. Its understandable how Glorfindel became your favorite character. I guess reading the books really does lead into the characters staying at different houses. Good work. Aria Breuer |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm... Legolas, Gimli, and Glorfindel's appearance in this story is starting to remind me of my own experience with Frodo. Of course, that was only one time and is a rather different experience. That's all I'll say on the matter. I don't feel comfortable speaking any further on it on this review. As for that spider, she can calm down. I'll review, just not with every chapter. Just who I am. Aria Breuer |