|Reviews for The World I Leave Behind|
| Nik chapter 17 . 9/3
I really enjoyed this! Great idea, great writing, great ending.
| justalittleconfusing chapter 1 . 12/31/2022
Wow! Beautiful! Poignant! Suspenseful! I was unable to put it down.
Truly one is the best fan fictions I have ever read. Bravo! Beautiful characterization. Adored the epilogue. All of it, bravo.
| Vittorio22 chapter 17 . 9/15/2022
Was a great story until it ended in a Ron/Hermione wedding instead of a Harry/Ginny wedding they deserved that happy ending not Ron and Hermione
| Mrs Pumpkins chapter 17 . 7/23/2022
Hi! I've read your whole story in the last two days and I loved it! It's really well-written with excellent plot and characterization. I'm glad to read you have published a novel. What's the title? I'd love to read it :-)
| eneath chapter 17 . 6/20/2022
This story was absolutely amazing to read, thank you so much for writing this!
| Mewpagano chapter 17 . 4/9/2022
one of the best fics that ever read!
| Guest chapter 17 . 3/31/2022
Well written, but could have been so much better without too much sentimentality and romance. It didn't exactly contribute to the plot. The first few chapters were brilliant with sweet bits here and there — emotion in moderation, if you will — but the later stuff, like the scene at his grave, could have been skipped. Harry was a lot more weepy and sentimental in many places. A lot of unnecessary plot twists and plot armour (the whole Ginny going into his mind to 'unlock him', the Squib thing and sex scene, Ginny killing Harry and him not dying, all of that was utter bullcrap with New Age shit, imo) to drag the conflict and the number of dramatic conflict scenes really cheapen the last battle, but it has some good points. Like Ginny in the invisibility cloak appearing at the end — that bit was brilliant, quite like Rowling. But the whole resurection stone thing and dead people appearing was silly. Of course, the (generally) masterful prose you've retained and an almost perfect reproduction of the characters must not be understated and credit must be given where it's due. Beautifully written. Except for the romance of course, that was pure bullshit, but that's ok I guess, it's fanfiction, your work, your indulgence. Great work.
| Marjorie chapter 3 . 9/9/2021
This chapter was so utterly heart-breaking and beautiful.
| Mabelfruit chapter 17 . 5/25/2021
This was posted so long ago, but I had to comment. This story was so well done. The characters, the plot, and the writing were all great. Thanks a lot.
| Guest chapter 15 . 3/24/2021
| Guest chapter 17 . 1/23/2021
FUCKING HELL THIS IS THE MOST BEAUTIFUL MASTER PIECE IN EXISTENCE. I DONT BELIVE THAT JK COULD JAVE WRITTEN IT BETTER. SO INCREDIBLE. IT TRULEY COMPETES THE BOOK.
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/22/2021
wow. that's it. incredible
| Steffie-Anckaert chapter 17 . 9/10/2020
Soo beautifully writen, loved your story!
| Surthum chapter 16 . 9/6/2020
I don't understand why Harry uses spells like *stupify* against Voldemort... which leads to my second point. Voldemort has over 50 years of magical knowledge. It isn't realistic for Harry to match him honing his power for a year only
| LBII chapter 17 . 7/18/2020
Well done! Thank you!