|Reviews for the two immortals|
| Emma writingwolf chapter 17 . 2/26
I really like your story it's really awesome! can you please continue it?
| Dark night Atorias chapter 17 . 1/12
Dude continue this story plz I know it is hard but come on I thought you said you were someone who didn't give up but I will still support your story
| Dark night Atorias chapter 11 . 1/12
My god why would you have them do that to Kallen that was a little to far. And don't be so mean twords your uncle I mean like any of it is any of my business but he still is family. Unless he is a dick,abusive or any other stuff like that. Oh and good job with this story man
| Dark night Atorias chapter 8 . 1/10
Oh come on man don't do that . C2 and Lelouch are going to start a family don't make a married man pick between his wife and a girl he liked 6 years
| TheChainUser chapter 16 . 9/27/2015
THIS IS ASWOME :D
| Anonymous chapter 17 . 10/18/2013
Don't do this.
| God Fenrir chapter 17 . 5/12/2013
i hope you update soon! i really like your story :3
| Eruptoren chapter 17 . 11/17/2012
? What not another chapter awww): please update soon.
| Eruptoren chapter 14 . 11/17/2012
Sorry but the way you typed i thought you were a girl but i sould have taken those spelling and punctuation errors into account. This is by far my second favorite code geass story.
| arika15 chapter 17 . 9/29/2012
please continue your story .
| The Storm Veradea chapter 18 . 6/9/2012
Your story is in violation of FFN Guidelines because it contains no story content. Please replace or remove the chapter.
-Storm of FoxClan
| chris bounds chapter 17 . 10/23/2010
hey again it's me chris. i've just read all of two immortals and it's a nice story but actually seems TO PEACEFUL for a code geass. also sence c.c. won't share and kallen's single will she go after suzaku now, and what is nanully's (spelling wrong) actual relationship with suzaku? keep up nice work.
| Code Name - I am NRG chapter 4 . 10/17/2010
Dude...I have been reading fanfiction stories for a couple years now and I have to say this...I can not unsee what I just read.
I have nothing against writers of your caliber or any for that matter. However, I would like to point out that you should imporve your writing style like previous reviews, it is extremely vague and I've been side tracked every 2 sentence.
But I encourage you not to lose hope but write better.
| Akuyuukai chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
Terrible. There should be a system to get rid of authors who show a TOTAL lack of skill.
| batmanz988 chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
great story i rely wonder whats going to happen next