|Reviews for Angel's Fallacy|
| Kunoichi21 chapter 3 . 9/23/2014
...wow. This was so... DEEP. It's impossible for me to completely wrap my head around this one, no matter how I may try. How on earth you wrote it, I'll never know. Wow.
| Ewonsama chapter 3 . 7/29/2014
Took me a day and half to read this but I got it done.
So...does Axel stay with Roxas or did Roxas take him? I mean even if Axel did become his "shadow" Roxas would have to keep going to the gates and axel would have to go with him, so wouldn't that mean he would have to really pass on?
My only question, great story and making me wish things like this were true, hehe they could be who really know
| Takara yume chapter 3 . 2/28/2014
Ahh beautiful, absolutely beautiful, I loved every bit of it ; c ; ))/
| Cresent Moon VIII chapter 3 . 9/26/2013
I am not at all religious, but just the way and the style or this unique peice is just awe-inspiring and beautiful! I love the way the plot was planed and how the story was exicuted. At the beginning of reading it I was like 'am I really going to like this?', but by the end I was crying and so sad its over. Great job, my official favorite story now.
| cerulean-calamus chapter 3 . 7/30/2012
I don't even know what to really say. I'm kind of lost for words on this piece you have written. But I'm totally in awe at the ideas and concept of this story line and how it began and how it ended. The pure description of the ideas of the mix between the barriers; the world of the living and the world of the dead and god. I was sucked in and now I'm kind of shocked it's over. I really enjoyed it even though I feel like I was left with the biggest cliff hanger of all. xD
But I'm glad I read it and I feel a little mystery left hanging around this chapter. The scene between Roxas and Axel was just awesome in the end. Axel's desire to see reapers and how it fit together with Roxas and how he reacted... aargghh! I can't put my emotions into words. But shit, this was a neat point of view to read. Thanks.
| That Panda You Know chapter 3 . 2/6/2012
The ending was so beautiful! Another great piece of story that warms my heart.
| P5hng-Me-A'Wy chapter 3 . 6/8/2011
wow, this was truly and amazing story.
| thequietreader chapter 3 . 4/1/2011
...So incredibly profound and touching...
That's all I have to say, really; I just really love your stories, which all go so deep in such a beautiful way.
| morning means KH chapter 3 . 1/8/2011
Oh God... I have read the whole story and I seriously love you, man! :D At least I love your writings ('cos never met you, heh')
Your text is so...rich and it really made me thinking. I am "religious" and I believe in God, so it was interesting to read this (and all stories including faith etc.). I have to admit, I didn't understand everything (English is not my mother language), but the most important parts I did.
I am an Axel-fangirl and somehow he fits to the role of priest, though I'm glad he is not "perfect" ;) All the characters have their reasons to be in the story, there are none without a reason and that's not sooo common in fics I have read so far.
Love Demyx and Zexion as a pairing but they are that almost every time so it's good they aren't in this one (or am I missing something?)And AkuRoku is love, so...;D And you really made their love story tragic, but not in a common way, I think. Points for the different kind of story line! :)
All in all I really enjoy reading this and it really pushes me to write better stories myself. :) Btw I have seen the picture in DA and you really have got the spirit of the picture in your story.
| Dreamy Duskywing chapter 3 . 11/14/2010
Gorgeous. Your writing is beautiful, I loved reading this story, it made me giggle (Zexion's "Stop that, you silly fool, don't be stupid! That is a book!" is something I would say and I found it highly amusing), it made me think about religious things which is very unlike me and I cried. Which is the ultimate sign of a well written story. I think this was a wonderful idea and it gave me lots to muse about. I'm so pleased that Axel was there to greet Zexion at the end, to forgive him, let him know that he did nothing wrong. Thank you for a wonderful read! xxx :)
| Funky Bracelet Chick chapter 3 . 9/24/2010
'Roxas remained within his grasp, ill at ease, but… only because the sensation of touch was so very unfamiliar to an angel of death.'
I absolutely love that line. It has so much hope in it. Even though we don't really find out what happens, I get the feeling that it was something good. ]]
| Phlogistics chapter 3 . 7/11/2010
This fic was amazing. Thank you so, so much for writing this!
| We Have Hearts chapter 3 . 4/8/2010
This is amazing.
I'm not all that religious, so I can't exactly relate to this but it was beautifully written. And it was because of that, that I kept reading. The whole thing was just one big plot twist, I could never see what was coming next, and THAT is the mark of a great story.
I have seen the picture that inspired this story, and I have to say you really captured the emotions in it. I'm seeing it all in a new light now after reading this, and it's almost like the picture is now based off of your story.
By the way, while I'm at it I just have to say, I've read some of your other stories as well and I love them all. You're a great writer, never stop!
| kitfallen chapter 3 . 2/26/2010
I'm not a deeply religious person either, but I do discuss such things often with people who are and I found your take on everything very realistic as a real religion. It also held that certain awe that comes when a character really truly believes in things greater than themselves, but also the shame and twisting emotions that come with giving up that greater sense for something different.
In short, bloody brilliant.
| random alias chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
aw, i was practically crying at the end, you wrote it so beautifully it hardly seemed sad yet it was really sad! im not making any sense here i just wanted you to know this story really touched me, and i love your work, more?