Reviews for I Make the Good Girls Go Bad
bloodsucker97 chapter 1 . 10/22/2009
i like that story 3

i hope you will make more chapters!
ecxe chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
i love this one shot. you are an amazing writer. (fangirl *sigh*)
TouchofRedemptionHintofElation chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
Oh loved it! You should continue it, I wan to know what happens next!
No longer on ff chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
Great story, I loved some of your lines:

..Pringles- I couldn’t have just one taste

..“You’re staring,” she murmured. “Have you seen you?”

..a lust cloud in my brain

You couldn't help but hate him in the beginning:

"this girl was putty in my hands"-among other things. And he kind of deserved it when she hurt his feelings. But, in the end he ended up being really sweet...Bella gets to him every time.

Ok, I'm done with all of your stories now, and loved them all. Now, go get busy on the next one, haha.
Ms. Jessica Cullen chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
i absolutely loved this, you are an amazing writer, i was surprisingly happy with every word on the story. weird to say... but. well done.
BrookeNichole chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
I loved it :D

You should like, make this into a story or even a two shot?

Please!

-BrookeNichole

XoXo
The Doctor Rose chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
cute
ArielleKrystene chapter 1 . 8/21/2009
Omg! I love this! Please tell me you've changed your mind and have decided to continue this story, I can see it has all the qualities to becoming an amazing story.

But as a one-shot, it's awesome.

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crashluva chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
I hope you write another part soon! I loved this. It was hot and very sweet 3
Suzy Q Something chapter 1 . 8/9/2009
really good
chivolute chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
tht was so sweet at the end and stuff. plus i love cobra starship haha. u should like, seriously considering making this a longer stor thn a one shot. but i still like the way u ended it ]
jonimitchell chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
I love you for mentioning Jack's Mannequin. I'm not usually into player Edward stuff, but I recognized the title from the Cobra Starship song and I was like, "I'll give it a shot!" So I did and I'm really glad.
SIINFULSAIINT chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
demented bunny chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
please please please please please continue this im begging you its so good and well written
Th3 VaMpIr3's ShAdOw chapter 1 . 7/18/2009
please write another chapter please please please.
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