Reviews for Lingering Moments
Guest chapter 19 . 12/7/2016
What a fucking prick. His mate is dying and he doesn't even consider changing her. I mean, he should've had these thoughts before - when he realized she was dying. There's simply no excuse
Pathatlon chapter 14 . 12/6/2016
I really like the idea of the story, and I want to continue, but it's really hard, because you cut everything off immediately. The whole thing with Lauren and Jessica calling Bella a druggie? We just moved on. In biologi with the teacher? We just moved on...
You seem so anxious to get to Edward, and the story moves too fast, which is such a shame, because I really like where it's going.

PM me if you ever re-update it :D
Guest chapter 1 . 6/23/2016
Oh.. Let's see what happens
rosaliehale1933 chapter 1 . 10/6/2015
No idea when this was originally published, but I'm just reading it now and I'm really interested in this!
Tmitidlover0412 chapter 27 . 8/17/2015
Love this story read it all in one day!
Gwenievre1 chapter 4 . 7/9/2014
Wait, if she's suddenly hesitant about dying, why not start the chemo again?
crew56 chapter 1 . 5/12/2014
Omf I just finished reading this nd I loved it! I jus cudnt put I down. Had 2 read nd f it was amazing. I almost cried nd that says something because I hardly. Shit dude u r one talanted writer! I wish this was the original twilight, wouldve been amazing :)
TheNerd12 chapter 26 . 4/21/2014
Awww! by goodness, this was the most amazing thing I have ever read and I want you to know that I loved it with all my heart. not to mention the spirit wrenching ending. well done for such an amazing read! I honestly wouldn't notice if you weren't an accomplished writer...Great you are gonna be J.K Rowling in disguise now with my luck!
TheNerd12 chapter 11 . 4/20/2014
Wow! this is an amazing story, its so well written i couldn't have done a better job myself!Thankyou for making my day with this amazing piece of writing!:)
m2r2a chapter 27 . 3/30/2014
Awww! Loved it!
Nat chapter 27 . 12/23/2013
I loved reading this. You are a very good writer, I've lost count on how many times I've cried, laughed or grinned ridiculously. I have really enjoyed reading this.
celia azul chapter 23 . 3/8/2013
I'm going to post this on any story I read. Vampires are really flamable why dosen't anyone carry a zippo around?
Belthezzor chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
I don't know why it stuck with me...but why does Jacob have to know. It's not like he and Bell are actually close. She's not close to Billy either, but Charlie probably wanted someone to confide in and chose his best friend. Jacob knowing seems a bit...I don't know...contrived I guess.
Raven Marcus chapter 26 . 12/8/2012
i love it! nicely written!
Shy girl 23 chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
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