Reviews for Topless Trouble
Lightning Type chapter 1 . 2/8
This is incredible. I was grinning ear-to-ear the entire time: your characterization and humor merged to form this jewel of a story. Excellent job!
nami chapter 1 . 1/8/2017
I love this XD
PokeshipHeart chapter 1 . 6/21/2016
Ah, Brock may need some time to recover :-*
Tropicallight chapter 1 . 6/13/2015
I loved Brock and pikachu's reaction...
riorio chapter 1 . 5/6/2015
Great story! THANKS! :)
Guest chapter 1 . 11/18/2014
Continue please? What is brock's reaction? What is Ash's reaction to her kissing him?
Guest chapter 1 . 6/23/2014
Misty is a 10 year old. T.T
Ready to fly chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
Hahahahahahahahahaha oh my gosh Brock is like a little kid covering his eyes in shock! I literally died with laughter! Ash and Misty are in for a awkward explanation that is after they finish their little moment ;) ;) loved this
JynxedHeroine chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
I loved it! So cute and funny!
November Ember chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
I love this! So sweet and full of mischief! Its so cute and not sopping with lame confessions :) good job with writing this!
xShadowSoulx chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
Lol, i love it! my favorite part was when brock showed up. lol, golden.
malymac chapter 1 . 1/18/2012
Wardrobe malfunction... Always a good plot device. Good story.
Rainwolf28 chapter 1 . 9/21/2011
Hey sorry I didn't review this last night it was the last story i read before bed...any who lol, this has gotta be one of the sweetest stories about Ash/Misty there is. It's not an outright porno like a lot of the stories even tho it has some suggestive elements and its got a perfect balance of detail. It could be published, im impressed
Anthony1l chapter 1 . 9/14/2011
This story is hilarious, interesting, original, touching, and unique.
DayDreamerS1 chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
Lol, this was great. It was funny and creative. Nice job
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