Reviews for Learning to Fall
twi-nighter chapter 1 . 10/27/2009
I totally needed that ending! jake and Nessie always need their hapy ever after... this was great! I liked Jake's POV, I didn't think it sounded forced at all. It sounded like Jake... irrational and unconfident Jake... and i loved it! There were parts that the wording may have been a little off and I didn't quite understand what you nwere trying to say but overall... I loved it! PS Breathe almost had me in tears which is weird that a oneshot could bring up so much emotion!
101amy101 chapter 1 . 7/5/2009
this was a really good fanfic i really enjoyed reading it except for the fact that he kept talking to himself for most of the beginning keep up the good work and if you do another story like this use more dialogue and not to much monologue but really good work i liked it a lot
kay chapter 1 . 7/5/2009
OMG that was great! i love it! keep writing like this! it is amazing! i am not even exagerating a little bit!
beth chapter 1 . 7/4/2009
Eh,it was okay I guess. But I think that you got Jacob down really well, anyway! Thanks for this!