|Reviews for The Heart of the Enduring|
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
Da fucK? This is rushed
| Lolasauras-Rex chapter 7 . 6/27/2013
Please update dude or dudett
| bob the bass chapter 7 . 4/2/2013
pretty cool story.
| BBWulf chapter 7 . 10/18/2012
graaaah! y u no make more chapter?! me want moar!
| Name chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
He didn't even become a Vasto Lorde :(
I hate the "goes from hollow-to-adjuchas fast-but arrancar pre-vasto lorde" concept.
I like that he seems loyal to Aizen, but he went arrancar a bit fast.
| Rickjames196 chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
Damn I don't wanna read this cause it seems abandoned good going by the way lulz considering you made this since naruxbleach cross are abandoned and what not. Xd chidori is the japanese name D. He better own sasgay or I'm gonna be pissed. Ohhh wtf is eating his chain? Bwahaha bitch, I read hiruzen sarutobi and I was like cool sarutobitch lived? then I kept on...'s former teammates lulz. Wow suckura is a fucking cunt. That's messed up keeping watching how the village is better without him -_- and hinata is a stupid cunt for not jyuuken'ing suckura for doing that to his body, tsunade too. Yes go to the dark side Naruto I hear they have cookies D. Where is kyu? He/she/it usually would be ranting bout him dying and what not. Stupid tsunade, damn that's messed up no one? He is back... KYahahaha man some one gotta do an elm street Naruto cross XD. Him killing people in their sleep would be so boss. Awesome he went hollow mode, I hope he kills the fuckers even if he disappears afterwards to get strong. Oh man he didn't kill anyone...gayyyy I hope there is a time skip T.T Lulz how weird would that be to suddenly have to learn how to walk on all fours . At least he has some practice from before when going kyuubi mode. He better not become aizen's bitch -_-. Considering Naruto is a new hollow that was pretty bad ass. Guess he didn't get any smarter after death? Bwahaha he ate a fucking gillian XD. Ewww he is becoming fat? XD. Damn he so weak T.T Bwahaha he ripped that bitch's mask. Hey don't disintegrate him or you can't eat him. Kyahahaa he was a fatty, that's so funny. Nuuuuuuuuuuuu fuck I don't want him working for that bitch. Fuck man he became aizen's bitch...time skip time skip !. Aizen never said his name 3. This is pretty good even if he is aizen's bitch. Why'd you stop?
| Kasyblack chapter 1 . 10/12/2011
Sorry, but it kind of is VERY strange ending for a chapter.
okay. let's imagine we have Hollow Naruto, all about power and not noticing anything around, not knowing of different kinds of Hollows till he evolves (at least that is what I gathered from the story so far). So, this guy goes and fights, eats enemies, bla-bla-bla-hollowz-r-zi-best. Okay.
Next, he fights with a powerful enemy, and just as he starts eating him a guy appears. For some reason, his first reaction is not a slightest bit of apprehention, fear, etc. I mean, guy appeared right after that psychowaiter he just fought. Who would suspect they might have been, I dunno, CONNECTED? Even if it is for a second or two or few dozens. He could guess if it was the end for him? Do/think something emotion-related? Or does he only have emotions when angsting and is prone to emptying his emotional baggage away when he sees power? Which, one might add, could just as well be used against him? Or is he "not an automaton" only in the middle of the chapter?
And if power was really Naruto's only goal, he met others only to eat them etc, then HOW THE HELL does he know what Aisen's name is when the guy hadn't told him yet? Is he a telepatic Hollow? Why does he not seem surprised at the proposal to become Arrancar? Isn't he interested at all about what he is agreeing to?
I might be a bit grumpy, but this chapter seems irritating so far...especially the end, which really seemed compressed to ridiculous level. If you dont have anything to say, shove in description, it might do it for you. the mark of the good creation is having space-and-time-frames and believable characters. At least two out of three. They are not irrational blobs of vacuum hanging in non-space. Unless THAT is what the story is about...
maybe I'll look at it tomorrow and it'll seem better by day...
| Shadowfire13 chapter 7 . 4/3/2011
please continue the story it was actually totally awesome and i would hate to see it go
| omally-dood chapter 7 . 3/12/2011
good 2 hear i cant w8 4 more
| omally-dood chapter 4 . 3/12/2011
lol man this is funny i really like the gay joke's
| Cupitor chapter 7 . 12/21/2010
I hope you'll update soon.
| Cooked Sashimi chapter 7 . 12/18/2010
what happened to this story? It's quite interesting, why'd you leave it at such a cliffhanger?
| Ronin Kenshin chapter 7 . 11/27/2010
aw man i really likie this fic i hope ya dont abandon it great work
| T00STr00nG chapter 7 . 10/16/2010
hope you gonna update soon than. Was hoping this be NarutoxYoruichi fic.
| Ulquiorra-quatro chapter 7 . 8/12/2010
I must have a bad sense of time, since this week turned out to be more than a month. But still, I love this story and it is an amazing plot, so I would love it if you would continue~