Reviews for Unexpected results
Koyfish chapter 13 . 4/8/2019
Please update
WhyWouldIBeObsessed chapter 13 . 12/15/2013
this story is the best i've read. can you continue to update this
HP-DG-AP-PN-RG-NR chapter 13 . 10/6/2013
Hey, where did the rest go? I hope that you didn't forget about this story! I'm really hoping that you'll update this one again, I'd like to read more.
antipodean chapter 13 . 6/16/2013
I love this story! I really wish you had continued it as the plot line could have been epic!
Zuchiku chapter 13 . 4/14/2013
I like your idea with the opposite behaviour for the moon cycle and how you got around the Ozaru transformation with the full moon. Did you plan to let that effect the relationship from Gohan and Videl already?

The one thing I'm a bit surprised about is, that you said the Saiyans are mercenaries. Even though they are Saiyans, I can't see Gohan, Mirai or Lime going on missions to destroy planets or killing other lifeforms without it being necessary or that they would approve of it, in the future. Neither do I think Goku, ChiChi or Bulma would approave of it happening at that moment.
I had hoped that in the Chapter where Mirai helped his dad, you would have elaborated a bit on what missions Vegeta approves of.

It's to bad you seemed to have stopped writing because this story was just getting started and I like the idea of Gohan growing up with more friends and having fun with pranks.
pir84lyf chapter 13 . 3/25/2013
and the rest?
lelekaka chapter 13 . 1/31/2013
loved xD
dcp1992 chapter 13 . 10/24/2012
Great story! I love the originality to it! though too bad the likely hood of it being updated is very slim, and just when Gohan might of started bonding to Videl by the comment on wanting to apologize to Videl. I would love to see it updated though!
silverbirdz chapter 11 . 4/22/2012
just curious,although it is not really relevant, at the begining the story mentions that the guys in the group of 5, have jobs at CC, does this not come up with their grounding, and Gohan seems to never go to his job.
Mirime Kisarrastine chapter 12 . 11/16/2011
Forgot to mention it in my other review. You won't ever know just how much I appreciate the fact that you named all of your Saiyan OCs after a vegetable of some kind. That is one of the worst things to happen in DBZ fics - the OCs having weird and downright unrealistic names. I applaud you for keeping up with the trend that Toriyama set up. Thank you for being an author who is considerate towards canon like this.
Mirime Kisarrastine chapter 13 . 11/16/2011
Well, the only thing that is not good about this story is the lack of updates ;) Otherwise, it's one of the most original and interesting stories in the "Gohan goes to a High School" corner of the fanfiction. The changes from the canon are enjoyable and well explained. The characters, both canon and original are interesting and most of them are very lovable. Usually, a large cast of OCs bothers me but not this time. They fit in well into the story. I am enjoying especially Valla. I'm not much for Mirai Trunks/OC pairings because the OCs don't appeal to me most of the time. But this one? Heck, I wish she was canon so I could ship them officially.

You might want someone to check over your spelling, though. There are several misspelled words that could be easily corrected but it's the only thing that marrs this otherwise great story. Really, I'll be holding my breath for an update, ok?
xXxRaYnExXx chapter 13 . 10/4/2011
I really love this story so please continue this story but i have a question what does patat and wortel mean and what language do the names come from please
Hellstone Monkey chapter 13 . 7/15/2011
Hey I like this it's pretty cool but could you update it at some point? Soon?
Wicked Lovely 17 chapter 13 . 6/23/2011
loved it. please update soon. :)
ReginaLuna chapter 13 . 1/23/2011
This fic is awesome! One of the best I've ever read.

I sincerely hope you will continue it because I would be really sad to find such a wonderful fic abandoned. You brought something special and new in this genre and I can't wait to read more.

Please update again :)
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