Reviews for Skyline Pigeon
Spidermonkey89 chapter 1 . 3/20/2010
This is really good !

Please finish!
SheDreamed0fParadise chapter 1 . 3/8/2010
PLEASE tell me you're going to continue! Please!
CSI Ana Lee chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
please continue
DarkestAngel11 chapter 1 . 2/25/2010
I just got through reading this book for my english class and I absolutly loved it! I really hope that you continue!
Vitam Viva chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
Great beginning! As your first story, it's really good!
Yva J chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
You've got a good start here, and I am so glad I can finally get back into reading stories again. Yours is the first I've read in like ages, so this is really nice.

I like the beginning and how you have paralleled their lives. I am really excited about where you're going to take this story and how their lives are going to cross again.

Constructively, you need to make each person that speaks a separate paragraph, that way it's easier to read who says what. Otherwise, you have done a good job with this and I look forward to reading more.

Happy writing. :)

~Yva J.
cullens1901 chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
oh! im so happy someone decided 2 write another summer of my german soldier fic. it is such a good story. you are working well with it. i love that you let anton live and that we see form his perspective. keep writing! you are doing a good job!
moonlite982 chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
i like this so far! keep writing, sounds like its going to be a good story:)