Reviews for Before Her Last Breath Outtakes
MaddieLovesDuke12 chapter 10 . 1/11/2014
Wow! Simply WOW! Thanks MLD12
MaddieLovesDuke12 chapter 9 . 1/11/2014
Just a few more minutes and they would have be discovered. OOPS! Loving these outtakes. MLD12
MaddieLovesDuke12 chapter 7 . 1/11/2014
Charlie and Renee. I just can't make myself really like them. Thanks for the story MLD12
MaddieLovesDuke12 chapter 6 . 1/9/2014
Wait what happen to Chicago? Loving this story Thanks MLD12
MaddieLovesDuke12 chapter 5 . 1/9/2014
Your outtakes are very funny. Why couldn't have all this been in the story? Loving it MLD12
MaddieLovesDuke12 chapter 4 . 1/9/2014
I love Jasper too. How he puts up with Alice? Loving this MLD12
MaddieLovesDuke12 chapter 3 . 1/9/2014
Visions. Got it. Little confused, but of course I sometimes stay that way. Loving the outtakes. MLD12
MaddieLovesDuke12 chapter 2 . 1/9/2014
Love her dream. Really Good. Thanks MLD12
MaddieLovesDuke12 chapter 1 . 1/9/2014
I'm surprise she didn't have to be told to shut her mouth. I could see Edward standing there. You are such a good writer. I really could see the scene from your description. Good going. MLD12
harkie5 chapter 10 . 10/29/2011
Nice to have everyones thoughts. Loved all of it.
Possie chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
I'm so pleased you did a BPOV, I love the way you wrote her so much better than most writers... I like spunky Bella!
Edward'sDJ chapter 8 . 11/9/2010
I still love Alice.
Edward'sDJ chapter 6 . 11/9/2010
Oh the communication divide...how differently they viewed the same conversation.
Edward'sDJ chapter 3 . 11/9/2010
I love Alice.
Edward'sDJ chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
I expected that Bella would have been too focused on being worried about having to go back for tests after a simple injury to pay too much attention to how droolworthy the Cullens are.
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