|Reviews for The Villain of the Story|
| GhostReader chapter 21 . 11/22/2013
Oooo I didn't even realize how long ago this was written.
Anyway if you're still around, amazingly great story, suuuper happy with the ending, being that Davis isn't doomed himself. Poetic justice be damned, Chlavis should win every once in a while. Well rounded, well written, spiffy job, kudos, etc.
Now back to watching the actual show...
| GhostReader chapter 9 . 11/22/2013
I don't often review anymore, but your Force Unleashed in jokes/references delighted me so much that I simply had to. "Why are you holding your lightsaber backwards?"
In other news since I'm taking the time to scrawl a review, I might as well compliment you on how in-character Davis in particular seems- in character yet in a manner that fits with the circumstances you've changed. Whoo! Well written ff ftw.
Chloe, I'm not sure if she's perfectly in character as she seems in many ways more of a symbol in the story- defined by her meaning to Davis rather than having a more active role in events, but she doesn't strike me as remotely OOC, so that's good.
I really hope this has a happy Davis ending :( too much tragedy for him as far as I'm concerned.
Keep up the good work!
| MaddAlice chapter 21 . 9/16/2013
This story was amazing! From start to finish, I couldn't stop reading!
| Androgynous-Heron chapter 21 . 6/15/2013
omg, will there more, please tell me there be more! please tell me because this story status does not say complete and it is giving me HOPE. OMG DOMSDAY I
YOU MAKE ME LOVE HIM.
| Blake2020 chapter 9 . 4/18/2013
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Ansome chapter doomdays the same beast that on the new game injustice ansome i seen this beast on smallville season 8?
| Silo666 chapter 21 . 1/27/2011
i think a fic where the kents have davis and doomsday becomes the hero as daves and doomsday are one and the same not seprert beings
| sokkantylee chapter 21 . 8/25/2010
I can't even begin to tell you how enthralled I am with this story... The more I read, the more I'm hooked.
Thank you so much for supplying me with another fix. And I can't wait for the next update.