|Reviews for Time Braid|
| Fereydoun chapter 31 . 2/27
This is one of the best naruto stories i have read. and the best part is I don't even like sakura that much (well I didn't before reading this story but now she kinda grew on me)
Can't wait to read more of your work.
| fascalia chapter 31 . 2/23
This is an absolute gem that I was advised to read by a reviewer. By far, this is in the top three of my favourite Sakura centric fics. I just so happened to read it all in one sitting so I didn't sleep at all.
First off, GOD your brain must be mindblowing. The imagination for this story is astounding. What with the aspects, the kami, the demons and the portrayal of different worlds in loops in time and space and just gah.
Secondly, your Sakura is just so good. So badass yet human and somehow compassionate.
The only thing that I noticed that didn't make sense was that you wrote she saw herself as a lesbian. That isn't true though, now is it? She's bisexual since she loves Naruto as a male as well.
Either way, conclusion; this fic is amazeballs.
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/19
Just so you know, I appreciate a ton this because you have a sub who's also a badass
| AthanatosOra chapter 20 . 2/16
I love the way you write.
I am a straight female(with a semi-open mind I would like to think, but still), and honestly, you could be writing about lesbian porn, gay porn, beastiality, necrophilia, whatever-the-fuck and I would still be riveted by the way you write.
It's (obviously) of a more mature humor, and everything about this story is... I wouldn't say "refreshing," but it's definitely different, interesting, well-written, engaging... I mean, I'm up to 20 chapters and first thing I thought when I noticed was, "whoa wait, what? Oh shit, when did the sun rise?"
I honestly don't know what to say other than, "I like this fic. I really like this fic." XD
| TangoDeltaBravo chapter 31 . 2/15
I absolutely love this story! The pacing is great, plot buildup is excellent, antagonists still threatening even in a time loop. The fact that there is a time loop is properly (ab)used by everyone. The plot of Kami and Demons stays interesting. Characters are relatable and build sympathy. The use of multiple perspectives doesn't confuse, is logical and serves a good purpose, which is a neat accomplishment when you're juggling multiple versions of the same character. I'm sure I'm forgetting a bunch of praises, but above all: the story was entertaining and gripping: I forgot to eat for most of a day while reading this in a single session. Probably one of my favourite stories of all time, thank you sincerely for writing and sharing it!
| zigmas chapter 30 . 2/11
This review belongs to chapter 31, but I already wrote there before.
I had to read this like three times to realize that Naruto only made a CHECK POINT after the exams - as in he DID NOT end the LOOPS!
This really asks for a Part TWO - probably being some Ootsutsuki Arc.
| Uncertain Shifter chapter 11 . 2/7
The end of this chapter had me giggling, chuckling, and lol alternatively!
| Qinetiq chapter 11 . 2/4
At first it was ok, but quickly grew into old one-trick pony. Not my cup of tea.
| Zex-TheBlackFang chapter 31 . 2/1
One of the best stories I have ever read. I couldn't stop smiling during the last chapter. Thanks for writing it.
| passanger chapter 31 . 1/28
It's been a long time since I've read such an awesome story.
Thank you very much.
But it still feels unfinished. How will Naruto unite Elemental Nations? Will Sakura become a Goddess after all? How will people react to their suspiciously advanced skills? What about Akatsuki?
I really hope there is a sequel.
| Aoi Shinkaze chapter 31 . 1/27
I don't know.
It was brilliant.
I managed to read it in one 24 hour cycle, so congrats on managing to hold my fragmentary attention with this bit of awesome.
I like the thought of God-Mode Sakura, accompanied by S-Rank Hinata, and Beyond God Mode Naruto.
Excellent job. -raises wine glass full of Sprite since I'm still underage-
| tdychko chapter 31 . 1/24
You are awesome. Thank you for that wonderful story.
| covertpartyhat chapter 31 . 1/23
I love this fic!
And that last line is pure perfection.
| Immortal Sailor Cosmos chapter 31 . 1/22
So, I read this maybe a dozen times now, and so I've finally gotten to the point where I don't need to reread the whole thing all the time. And let me tell you, that trashed my sleep schedule, and productivity, homework, cleaning, and writing the last time I did it, about four months ago. But I just connected that "meeting with Itachi" thing. Is there anyway we can get that in like a I shot or outline even? I'd love to see what way Sakura takes that, as a Kami, and demon, as a "mortal" Sharingan user? This is a beautifully written time loop story. I don't read too many anymore, and I rarely reread any. Once you'be seen a "this is how you fix" scene, a lot of them seem repetitive, but I love this one.
| TheNinjaFromYesterday chapter 31 . 1/20
A very, very, good ending! I love this story!