|Reviews for Not Yet|
| Impaladreams chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
Oh, so sad.
| Tribble Master chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
it's not bad. WRITE ON!
| Port-of-Seas chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
A pro wrestler? Geez, Dean, learn to pick your fights!
| snsw25kr14 chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
Aw...such a cute story. Nicely done. )
| Mad Server chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
"Oh, right, friggin’ ghost of a friggin’ pro wrestler."
Deanie! That's gotta hurt.
I really like the way you stick with Dean's POV in this, bringing in different senses as they enter into his awareness - touch, then sight, then more coherent speculation which OK is not a sense but, you get what I'm going for, right? :) It puts us in his shoes in a really compelling way.
| PlatinumRoseLady chapter 1 . 7/6/2009