Reviews for Not Yet
Impaladreams chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
Oh, so sad.

Sweet drabble

jane
Tribble Master chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
it's not bad. WRITE ON!
Port-of-Seas chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
A pro wrestler? Geez, Dean, learn to pick your fights!
snsw25kr14 chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
Aw...such a cute story. Nicely done. )
Mad Server chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
"Oh, right, friggin’ ghost of a friggin’ pro wrestler."

Deanie! That's gotta hurt.

I really like the way you stick with Dean's POV in this, bringing in different senses as they enter into his awareness - touch, then sight, then more coherent speculation which OK is not a sense but, you get what I'm going for, right? :) It puts us in his shoes in a really compelling way.
PlatinumRoseLady chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
Very well-done.