Reviews for Falter
MisunderstoodArtist chapter 48 . 8/26
Amazing story! I love Teen Titans and crossover parings with Raven done right! Twilight was never my favorite read for me as the love was to cheesy and certain aspects just seemed to not fit or were plain annoying, bland, and or vain. Regardless, you did a great job meshing these two series together and all the Twlight commets, opinions, and jokes you made about Edward, Bella, and the whole Vampier being flawless and losing fat was hilarious and I couldn't agree more! But, if I had to disagree with one thing it would be Jasper dying and Raven going back in time leaving the Titans. There was nothing wrong with how you executed it, in fact it was as beautiful as it was sad and endearing- all together- but selfishly I wish Jasper just would have lived and stayed a vamp and had some long distance relationship via visits with Raven where they would live togther in the future once the Titans went their own ways or died from old age... Thats actually still kinda sad but lol I though half-breeds would live long just not as long as Vampiers. Anyways, just wanted to commet and say that you have made a great crossover story; also you have amazing talent and I hope more Raven fics are soon to come.
Demon chapter 8 . 7/2
yuu1202 chapter 8 . 4/2
I had to stop here, She was kidnapped and she could have gotten away easy I mean how many times have we seen her fly in the teen titans cartoon "not using magic in forks" doesn't count when you are being held against your will and yet even though Jasper Kidnapped her she still will end up with him anyways. Other then that its a decent story just wasn't my cup of tea
Alice Queen of Madness chapter 48 . 2/6
That was a beautiful ending to an absolutely amazing story...everyone was completely in character and i loved every second of it...bravo:)
Alice Queen of Madness chapter 43 . 2/6
lol mute Bella with a mustache...loved the Nevermore scenes
Alice Queen of Madness chapter 40 . 2/6
Is it bad that i hope Bella dies...well at least Raven's alive...and the good news is if Bella dies Edward does too
Alice Queen of Madness chapter 39 . 2/6
Yep Raven's dead...again
Alice Queen of Madness chapter 36 . 2/5
I seriously love Susanahh...she truly is my favorite Jasper and Raven's relationship is juts like one huge rollercoaster ride...i'm surprised no one else has gotten sick yet
Alice Queen of Madness chapter 34 . 2/5
I'm loving this so far...Tuesday is a very unique character...i like her allot but she's very delusional...and kind of Yandere...i don't think Alex is going to be too trusting after she lied to him...also is see her life ending up the same way Bree Tanner's ended up...i'm also liking how Edward and Bella aren;t getting as much screen time...i swear Twilight would have absolute great if those two weren't in the movie at all...great chapter so far Susannah is by favorite character...i love how unstable she is
Alice Queen of Madness chapter 26 . 2/5
ikr Big people are attractive too...its so insensitive
Alice Queen of Madness chapter 25 . 2/5
not a poor kitten
Alice Queen of Madness chapter 3 . 2/4
I actually really like the idea of Jasper and Raven together...i never thought about it until i found this story but when you think about it they really go well together...i just hope Alice won't be to broke hearted about it
Alice Queen of Madness chapter 2 . 2/4
A personified traffic you have Raven 100% in character...i freaking LOVE THIS story...its absolutely amazing
RavenRechior chapter 48 . 12/3/2015
That. Was AWESOME! I'm so glad it all worked out... And the time-travelling idea to go save Jasper from even becoming a vampire was ingenius. _ Thanks for the awesome ride, and I will probably check out your other stories as well _ OH btw... Heady is awesome, too ;) Anyway... Later

RavenRechior chapter 20 . 12/1/2015
Shaddup I am not :P
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