|Reviews for Falter|
| KillerRaven1915 chapter 3 . 1/24
I so agree with ya they would be great together
| Stiffinme chapter 37 . 12/26/2013
Wow. "Somebody that i used to know" is that old? Huh. I just heard it this past year. Smh
| Booker10 chapter 48 . 12/18/2013
Love it!:DDD I would love to see a ones hot or something if jasper and raven ran into Carlisle, since their both doctors maybe they met at a hospital?... Even though raven would be really old...still!:)
| Why881992883840002882818839 chapter 48 . 12/16/2013
This story kinda pissed me off. I enjoyed the beginning of it but in the end you turned Raven into something just as annoying and melodramatic as Bella Swan. Which is just wrong. I was actually pleased when Jasper died at the end, I thought you were going to use that as a chance for Raven to grow, become stronger, but noooooo, she went all Bella on us and got unbearably annoying, in the end I jut wished both of them had died. I didn't think anyone could make me hate Raven but you did.
Other than that it wasn't a terrible story, not badly written for a fanfic and mostly intertaining. But if you like Raven and not some mopey version of her who would get suicidally depressed because some guy she knew for a few weeks died I would advise you not to read this. If you like that kind of over the top drivel than this is the story for you.
| Jinseiwakurai-Shouganai chapter 4 . 12/14/2013
Swag. Raven is just swag.
| Ever Winter Wood chapter 48 . 11/10/2013
I was hesitant to read this at first, since despite the lack of Twilight/Teen Titans crossovers, they were for the most part terribly done, but once I started I couldn't stop. You perfectly created a crossover where there was no rips at the seams of the stitching. I was very, very impressed by your dedication, grammar, spelling, and research, too. Also, he pairings were both adorable and nicely thought out.
When Jasper died, I was about to stop reading-I hate it when authors kill their main character and then the characters lover goes crazy, kills themselves, or lives in mourning the rest of their lives. However, I decided to keep going, mainly because it had been terrific since then, and I have to say I adored the little twist with time travelling. I don't think any other ending would have suited it better, except perhaps an epilogue with Jasper and Raven's children. (Blonde haired, purple-eyed children would be positively adorable!)
All in all, this is the best crossover I've ever had the pleasure to read!
| MySillyPresentRevise chapter 48 . 9/19/2013
You are an amazing writer with very vivid imagination I have never been one to say that I was a fan of Twilight, but this story has honestly opened up my opinion. I honestly felt like punching the wall and I was crying hysterically when I read the chapter that jasper dies, also the part where she goes into the freezer. I love the Teen Titans but this twist and crossed story was simply amazing. Please continue posting your stories as I now enjoy them very much. Thank you once again.
| mar chapter 48 . 8/21/2013
Wow the truth is I'm not at all fan of twilight but your story was really good, incredible as it may seem, I mostly only three days to read it to me all and that is saying something when you have other things to do like school xD, in finally, I congratulate you for this wonderful story and I can tell you that very few stories that capture senting the reader as it did this, I hope you continue writing and delighting us with more stories like this. I felt super-identified with Raven and the thinking of Bella and Edward's why you really piendo of these two characters since I read the first volume of the story, but anyway, take care a lot and go ahead with the ingenuity
| Guest chapter 25 . 7/16/2013
NOT THE KITTIES!... anyways now that that's over I'm really enjoying your story so far and i find it very interesting and entertaining. I would've wanted more interactions with the pack and the titans they would've gotten along well and it would've been fun and would possibly lead to inevitable prank wars.
| Meister Bree chapter 48 . 7/14/2013
Chapters 45 and 46...I cried. The story was great and always kept me on my toes. I enjoyed it.
| grizzlybear2000 chapter 25 . 7/12/2013
This is awesome! And I am a little scared about the kitten dieing :(
| XxKyuubiRoxX chapter 48 . 7/4/2013
This fucking hurt me. I'm still trying to figure out how I stumbled upon this story and thought it was a good idea to give it a try! Crazy sounding xover and crazy sounding pairing aside, I shrugged my shoulders and said, "What the hell. What do I have to lose?"
My fucking heart.
That's what I had to lose.
Geez and Raven and Jasper and drama and the Titans and death and asdkjlsadkj! Really!? I was wearing way too much makeup to cry (welcome to musical theater... gah... makeup) when I read chp 45 or 46 or whatever the hell the chapter was that you killed Jasper and all of my hopes and dreams in! :(
I really can't decide it I love or hate you right now.
On the one hand, this was incredibly creative and unforgettable and made me want to continue reading all the way to the end despite the numerous typos and things, but on the other hand, this story drug my emotions on a final destination type roller coaster ride. At first they were confused, then they were angry, then excited, but by the end they were completely crushed. I don't usually cry for fanfics I hope you know...
I don't think I'll be able to fully function as a human being tomorrow because of you...
I do thank you for the happy (?) ending though. I guess not so much happy as bittersweet. I'm very happy that Raven and Jasper are in fact together and Jasper is human and they'll be able to grow old together and sit on their porch telling old war stories to their grandkids one day but she did just up and leave EVERYONE. I know Robin was at peace with the whole arrangement at the end but I'm sure as hell not :(
Again I both love and hate you... Thank you for sharing and writing this story. I think. From the words of Spock, "I am emotionally compromised."
| Awesomeness-in-words chapter 4 . 4/13/2013
Fruit salad! Well, you said juicy...
| Awesomeness-in-words chapter 3 . 4/13/2013
I'll pay you to keep writing, if you want!
PLEEEASE DON'T KILL ALICE!
| 1a2b3c4d chapter 30 . 4/8/2013
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