Reviews for Falter
Guest chapter 48 . 4/15
I read this a few years back and came back to it several days ago. I still can't believe just how well-crafted it is, especially with Jasper and Raven's relationship - it was really well-developed, and left me either going: YES or NONONOMO at times XD the ending I felt was quite unique, though I probably should've seen skmething like that coming from when Raven travelled back in time. Robin and Raven's relationship was also something I enjoyed, as it showed off almost perfectly how they would interact and his protectiveness over her.

Again, I love this story, you're a great writer, and I'm just going to go back and reread the whole story again. :p
Guest chapter 38 . 4/6
I believe that is trigon who is speaking to Jasper
Fanfiction-Addict101 chapter 11 . 12/15/2016
Why don't they call her? One of the Cullen's will most likely pick up and they can talk to the Titans.
MisunderstoodArtist chapter 48 . 8/26/2016
Amazing story! I love Teen Titans and crossover parings with Raven done right! Twilight was never my favorite read for me as the love was to cheesy and certain aspects just seemed to not fit or were plain annoying, bland, and or vain. Regardless, you did a great job meshing these two series together and all the Twlight commets, opinions, and jokes you made about Edward, Bella, and the whole Vampier being flawless and losing fat was hilarious and I couldn't agree more! But, if I had to disagree with one thing it would be Jasper dying and Raven going back in time leaving the Titans. There was nothing wrong with how you executed it, in fact it was as beautiful as it was sad and endearing- all together- but selfishly I wish Jasper just would have lived and stayed a vamp and had some long distance relationship via visits with Raven where they would live togther in the future once the Titans went their own ways or died from old age... Thats actually still kinda sad but lol I though half-breeds would live long just not as long as Vampiers. Anyways, just wanted to commet and say that you have made a great crossover story; also you have amazing talent and I hope more Raven fics are soon to come.
Demon chapter 8 . 7/2/2016
LaserDream165 chapter 8 . 4/2/2016
I had to stop here, She was kidnapped and she could have gotten away easy I mean how many times have we seen her fly in the teen titans cartoon "not using magic in forks" doesn't count when you are being held against your will and yet even though Jasper Kidnapped her she still will end up with him anyways. Other then that its a decent story just wasn't my cup of tea
Zoey101fan3600 chapter 48 . 2/6/2016
That was a beautiful ending to an absolutely amazing story...everyone was completely in character and i loved every second of it...bravo:)
Zoey101fan3600 chapter 43 . 2/6/2016
lol mute Bella with a mustache...loved the Nevermore scenes
Zoey101fan3600 chapter 40 . 2/6/2016
Is it bad that i hope Bella dies...well at least Raven's alive...and the good news is if Bella dies Edward does too
Zoey101fan3600 chapter 39 . 2/6/2016
Yep Raven's dead...again
Zoey101fan3600 chapter 36 . 2/5/2016
I seriously love Susanahh...she truly is my favorite Jasper and Raven's relationship is juts like one huge rollercoaster ride...i'm surprised no one else has gotten sick yet
Zoey101fan3600 chapter 34 . 2/5/2016
I'm loving this so far...Tuesday is a very unique character...i like her allot but she's very delusional...and kind of Yandere...i don't think Alex is going to be too trusting after she lied to him...also is see her life ending up the same way Bree Tanner's ended up...i'm also liking how Edward and Bella aren;t getting as much screen time...i swear Twilight would have absolute great if those two weren't in the movie at all...great chapter so far Susannah is by favorite character...i love how unstable she is
Zoey101fan3600 chapter 26 . 2/5/2016
ikr Big people are attractive too...its so insensitive
Zoey101fan3600 chapter 25 . 2/5/2016
not a poor kitten
Zoey101fan3600 chapter 3 . 2/4/2016
I actually really like the idea of Jasper and Raven together...i never thought about it until i found this story but when you think about it they really go well together...i just hope Alice won't be to broke hearted about it
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