|Reviews for Torn|
| The Ram Princess chapter 24 . 6/5
I enjoyed this story as well. Kakashi and Kaoru's relationship seemed really pure until the rape scene. That scarred me.
I like Sai and Sakura's relationship in this story. He's very encouraging and supportive. I also love how intense Kakashi got when Sakura came to him about sponsoring her for ANBU and he got all dominant and stuff.
When Kakasaku fell in love with one another, that was a good scene too, because it wasn't over the top or less than subtle for this type of story. It was gracefully written and perfect.
I also like the feeling of anticipation and dread of everything after the fact of when Kakashi got a seduction mission to assinate his ex-lover. I wasn't sure how it would turn out, but everything worked out so thank you!
| Kuri chapter 1 . 1/31
I will not be reading this because reading rape is something I just can't do; mentions of it, sure, but not actual scenes. I do want to say though that I appreciate your note at the beginning of this fic letting people know it will be there, and also giving advice for people who have been in those situations. Not enough people do this, and so it's really great that you have and I wanted to let you know that it's appreciated, even though I have no idea if you will see this.
| Tsubahime chapter 24 . 8/13/2017
This story is awesome, raw and captivating. At times it was difficult to read, the subject matter was tough,but it was wellworth seeing how the characters dealt with their situations. It kept me engrossed until the last line.
| Mariselo chapter 24 . 10/31/2016
Very 5deep story full of anguish in m y opinion. V
Well written with a little suspense. I do love a strong sakura.
| Izzaj chapter 24 . 1/19/2016
Your story is amazing. So touching and full of emotions. I think that I will come back to it very often. Greetings :)
| crybabies chapter 24 . 10/19/2015
Holy shit, that emotional roller coaster...
| Guest chapter 24 . 8/21/2015
I just wanted to say that this was beautiful to read and so very deep. This fic has truly opened my eyes to the horrors of rape and the tolls it takes on its victims, both female and male.
Throughout life this is a constant topic and even though I have heard and understand it, I guess it never really sank in on what can happen to the victim mentally. I've been watching anime for a while, Naruto especially, and have increasingly grown very attached to its characters. This fanfic involved one of my favorite characters, Kakashi, one who I see often as strong and seemingly invincible. After reading what he went through and seeing him hit his lowest point, it really struck me. I know it may sound dumb to people who don't really get attached to characters, but for me this story sent me a message much more powerful then anything else I've seen that is anti-rape.
As for the rest, I feel that this was a very intriguing story in how it portrayed the many aspects of such a terrible deed. Though the main subject of the story is quite controversial at times in how it is portrayed, I thought you maintained a tasteful and respectful aura throughout it all.
I'm not sure if you'll even read this, but if you do I just wanted to let you know that this was a lot more than just another fanfic for me. Thx:)
-just a fan
| jhian casey chapter 1 . 5/26/2015
my interest is already piqued just by the title and short intro alone.. then when i got into chapter 1 and more intros about the fic is given, im into this right away.. its not like i have a thing for rape or something.. its just that, just by the intro alone, you kniw that this is a well-thought fic that has a deeper approach than any other romance/mature fics.. and its educational so, im very excited into starting reading this fic.. in advance, job well done!;) and thanks!;)
| HelleBelle chapter 18 . 2/21/2015
Oh god Kakashi oh no
| ummIDK chapter 24 . 2/4/2015
Aww that's such a good story! It's the first kakashi/Sakura story I've ready and I really enjoyed it! I guess that opens me up to that much more stories! Thank you!
| Devektra chapter 17 . 12/29/2014
I found your profile when I was searching after fanfics about Sai, then I found Mona Lisa translated for portuguese (i'm not a native english speaker). I found myself wrapped around the history so bad, around the plot that I just went to your profile and finished reading in english in almost one day ! after i read The Bet and now i'm currently reading this one. All I want to say is that you are so amazing talented that every couple you write about is worth reading the story! I'm really not into any of the pairings you wrote in the histories I've read so far (Kakashi-Sakura/Sai-sakura/naruto-sasuke) but you put it in a brilliant and so well ploted way thats impossible to not fall in love with all of your histories. I hope you dont think I am a freak, just wanted to express my admiration for your talent. And sorry for any grammar mistakes.
| cherryflowerblossoms chapter 20 . 12/23/2014
I called it. I knew she'd feel horrible once she found out. After all if she hadn't of pushed to get into ANBU, Kakashi would t be I. This position now.
| cherryflowerblossoms chapter 17 . 12/23/2014
Oh snap. Keep nada thought this might have been the case but still was kinda not expecting it to actually happen.
| cherryflowerblossoms chapter 11 . 12/23/2014
I'm sure you are going to and have caught a lot of hate over this part of the story. Let me just say that as a rape victim myself, you wrote this in a very respectful way. You should be proud, because you managed to allow your readers to understand what it may be like to be in such a situation without being vulgar or vividly disturbing.
These things are never fun to write, however, it is something that -unfortunately- happens in real life and what is a writer but a teller of stories that happen to people giving us a glimpse into the life and troubles of another as a means to learn about ourselves and grow?
So thank you for writing this. Avoidance is not the key. Hiding or pretending that rape occurs is no help to anyone. So by putting characters that we all know, love, and connect with through such horrible circumstances, you have opened the door for those reading to empathize with real rape victims, and maybe even see through their eyes for a bit.
| cherryflowerblossoms chapter 10 . 12/23/2014
Well this was certainly a very heavy chapter. Then again, the whole story has been very heavy. Beautifully written and captivating, as always. My only thought upon reading was that her wording could be interpreted by Kakashi as insulting or calling him hideous, or something along those lines. I mean, the reader knows what you meant, but for Kakashi, it would be hard to think that he wouldn't be somewhat wounded by her reaction. Especially since he is not aware she has began to piece together the puzzle of his history in ANBU.