Reviews for The Sweetest Love
beavermeadowsbev chapter 1 . 10/22/2010
that was really intimate but good job
JeZrA-Amutlover110 chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
I wish Hotaru was spying on them and showing it in front of the WHOLE cafetiria!Then every one makes a rumor.
xXx siLver m0on xXx chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
more !

ahahhaha !

i want more !
apenny12 chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT! I'm glad you didn't involve the other characters much, it would've taken away from the story. Hotaru blackmailing Natsume and Mikan always seems to ruin the story for me...anyway! I can't believe this is your first fanfic! It was absolutely amazing, sweet, and totally how I would imagine Natsume and Mikan finally confessing. You really nailed Nastume's character! Excellent job! Definitely a fav!
FromTheCanopyAbove chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
YAY! Thank you for the fluff-iness! I love it!
ichigo-kitten chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
your kidding right? itnis GREAT! I love ur story its so (*KAWAII*) ;3
SweetLonelyWriter chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
It's so sweet deshou~! hahahaha! Loved it!
quinch chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
haha. nice story. keep up the good work.
chibbikim15 chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
kawaii!
XxblackwingsxX chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
sweet! Hope to read more of your fics! Ja ne! Good luck!
Silver-MoonNight chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
pretty much a cliche and often use.

hoping for your new story soon

~haruh
xpinkheroinex chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
lol omg i loved it!~

it was so cute! even with out hotaru!~

oh and one way to improve yourself.

"Feeling restless and the exact opposite feeling of sleepy, Mikan Sakura got out of bed, got out of her room, and headed towards her, no wait, their Sakura tree"

this was written in the you included some words that really dumb down your writing.

"Feeling restless Mikan Sakura got out of bed, and rushed out of her room. she was heading towards her, no wait, their Sakura tree"

so yeah... bad at explaining hehe so good luck on future stories.
Sweetcheeks3662 chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
Nice story!

I like the way this story was written. Nice plot, it was really addicting. You left a lot of spots blank, like what happened to Persona, and Hotaru. Overall, it was really good. I can tell that if you keep writing, you'll get really good. Don't let anything stop you.

Keep it up. You can send me a message if you need anything. I'll help you out.

~Sweetcheeks
chrisca123456789 chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
this waspretty good _