Reviews for French Fries
Tallis-chan chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
Hahahaha! Loved it!
Watermelon chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
Adorable 3
Angel of Lavender chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
Love how he eats the fry he was poking Watanuki with *heart*
barefoot11 chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
He's totally in denial. x3

This was really cute! I like it how Doumeki says it out of no where, too, taking Watanuki by surprise. It's so like him! xD

"...or something in the back of Yuuko's shop he'd accidentally exposed himself to"

That made me laugh the most, for some reason or another. xD
SlythSilverDoeInPJ's chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
Wow, I loved it! Very very in character. Watanuki NOT in denial is awesome and Doumeki's "Oi. I like you" is deffinitely him.

Just what I was looking for, really, great work.
crimsonrosepetals NLI chapter 1 . 7/14/2009

First of all, great first line; really very eye-catching XD

Secondly, I must say I found Watanuki and Doumeki very in character; good job with them, and also with your writing - very simple, but just right (in its simplicity) and quite flowing.

And lastly, this needs a sequel. Please :D

Wonderful work :)
Val-Creative chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
HEY! NO CURSING AT YOURSELF WHEN YOU WRITE STUFF LIKE THIS! This is a really nice little of the cuter love confessions between them...and ended pretty well too. *approves* LUFF!

~ Val
forevernyu chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
HA HA HA! That was good! I loved how Watanuki was NOT in denial and the "totally-not-kissable mouth", brilliant!

But why is Doumeki sitting back and watching his pray flee? It's not like him...

Anyways I hope there's more ;)
Starriecat chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
Haha this would so totally happen. So in-character.