Reviews for Unexpected Attraction
kittenxxkisses chapter 1 . 11/12/2010
Aw it's so sweet. Why do they call Victoire Bellatrix? I didn't get that. And who's child is Fred?

I also think that you should replace the

"Je ne veux jamais voir de noveau! Nous sommes par!"

with

"Je ne veux jamais te revoir! Nous avons terminé"

It means "I never want to see you again. We are finished" which I think is what you meant to say.

I loved it though, it was really gentle romance... :)
Samuel Pletcher chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
Overall a good story, I especially liked the ending and how everything seemed to tie up nicely. I would suggest a bit more characterization.
JacobsImprintGirl chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
wow! love it

please write more

x
Faerie0975 chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
Aw!
Princess Ducky chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
That was very very very cute. Loved It

Keep Writing

Princess Ducky
Skittles713 chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
Wow! Beautifully written. I like this a lot. Is there going to be a follow up? Wow... Very good work. )