Reviews for The Punishment of the Sun
Kevin chapter 33 . 3/19/2017
I was shocked to see you added a new chapter sort of. I am glad you fixed the typos. You've got a great story, now it will be even better. And I can't wait to read th story again while listening to the audiobook version on YouTube.
Kevin chapter 32 . 6/13/2015
I just read this whole story over the last few days! Every chapter was amazing and well thought out! I wish this was a game! This is like the best Fanfic of Suikoden I have ever read. Awesome Job! I am only sad because I wish there was more to read.
AoiKishi chapter 1 . 2/10/2015
hi Milkandchocolate!
thanks for reading my fic.
thanks soo much :)
Yami no Majou077 chapter 32 . 1/20/2015
ohh...this story has come to an has been a long time, i'm so happy this story end so peacefully. and the ending, and epilogue are great. love it, and thank you for this great story.
Bob chapter 31 . 1/19/2015
Great work. Man this is just awesome
Guest chapter 32 . 1/19/2015
This is like the best fanfiction I have ever read about suikoden. I can't wait to see what u do next. Shame u can't publish this it make a great novel !
Guest chapter 32 . 1/17/2015
Milkandchocolate chapter 32 . 1/15/2015
I like this epilogue hahaha...
While reading every word, sentence and paragraph I enjoyed it I also imagine the ending where the characters picture, name and ending is displayed at my T.V. screen.

The postscript It is also fun as it ever be...

Will Siemon appear in your next story?

Thank you for writing this great story... I hope many reads this story...
Milkandchocolate chapter 31 . 1/15/2015
Wow! Nice ending...
Punishing Lazlo like that Awwwwww!
Anyway Over all the ending is great I like it.

I think Lazlo's is so peacefull while his laughing...
MagnumZ chapter 30 . 1/14/2015
Nice job. Your doing good.
MagnumZ chapter 29 . 1/14/2015
Another great chapter
Milkandchocolate chapter 30 . 1/13/2015
There are typo errors but still this is great as ever. It had many exciting part that made me smile and it is not boring to read.

The part that I like most is the battle of the Moth and Lazlo's fourth summoning spell the headless angel.

Over all every detail is precise and I don't know how to describe it but this is great...

Take care...
Milkandchocolate chapter 29 . 1/13/2015
The Sun Rune can go to where the twilight and the dawn rune is how?

I remember the hole under the land and is that the hole near rainwall if I remembered correctly.

Hahahaha I love this XD I remember Freyjadour fighting in the ruins with the hardest boss in the game.

Thanks for the update I'm really glad you update it...
Mearn-Tahl chapter 2 . 1/9/2015
Its been awhile since I've read FF, and when I found your lovely fic, I couldn't stop reading, stories regarding the hero from Suikoden 4 are my favorites. Nice job. :)
GIC chapter 1 . 1/7/2015
I'm excited for the new chapter XD
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