|Reviews for The Punishment of the Sun|
| Mike chapter 17 . 3/8
w00t I am number 100! Great story, I am loving it. This chapter was long, but very good. My favorite part was when the kiss got interrupted and when Rose beat the crap out of that guy. LMAO! I woke my wife from laughing,I could just picture it so well!
| Ken chapter 17 . 3/6
Amoz Barrows and Euram Barrows they have the same personality. hehehe I think It's okay because Amoz is Euram's Ancestor.
I am not confuse with the Bell ringing, it's really accurate.
All I could say is Wow. I like the plot.
My favorite part, the truth is every Amoz Barrows scene hehehehe... coz I'm having fun imagining he have the same face of Euram Barrows with a fear look on his face.
I'll give you 5.
Almost all of the chapter I read is very long but are worthy to read. I am hoping that this is not the last chapter that I will read in this fanfiction.
| Ken chapter 16 . 3/5
I enjoyed this chapter. You made this really clean and clear. I'll give you 5.
The book, is that the book that Alhazared tried to find? that would be interesting. For a long time I been wondering where is that book came from. I just know little about it.
Who will have a cameo appearance? I'll try to guess Kika, Mitsuba, maybe Jeane or Ted or Corselia... Suikoden 5 familiar faces ummmm... I'm started to smile. Whoever you will put there I know you will have a great Idea to come up with.
As far as I know your story is one of the most interesting fanfiction story in fanfiction. I feel like it's really connected in the game.
It give me the creeps when someone said ,"The bodies of the dead is stolen." I want to read the war battle sometime hehehehe... Lazlo and Olinda Pairing I see.
Too bad Lazlo will ended up alone everyone he knows will eventually die...
| Ken chapter 15 . 3/4
I played suikoden 4 last week and when I enter the room of King Lino before the final battle at Fort Eal Eal he said 15 years later, Flare and her younger brother(Lazlo) were new born and the Queen of Obel unleashed the power of Rune Of Punishment then died and his new born son(Lazlo) the prince, is missing that day.
It means Lazlo is missing for 15 years and the rune of punishment return to them once more after 15 years not 16 years.
"I'm sorry if I'm being rude but I have to tell what's on my mind."
I'm playing Suikoden 5 right now and you are right the "Nethergates" change their master. I don't know who said it but I remember someone said, Nethergates serve's once for the Falenan Royal Family then Ferid and Queen Arshtat disbanded them and then they serve now for Godwin Family.
About this chapter "Well done". I like your Idea.
It still connected between Suikoden 4 and Suikoden 5.
I'll give you 4.9.
Please continue the good work.
| AoiKishi chapter 2 . 3/3
ok, nice fic
| Ken chapter 14 . 3/3
This is so good to be true... I found another favorite chapter.
The story is great for a side quest.
I'll give you 5.
| mrfuzz90 chapter 2 . 3/3
ok that got me interested, the plot and writing style ignite my curiosity, i never play suikoden before and no idea of it but the story is interesting, i will read the rest after i had free time, anyway nice story :D
| Ken chapter 13 . 3/2
All I can say in this chapter is WOW... I like this one.
I'll give you 5.
| IarIz chapter 17 . 3/1
xD... they almost kiss... jiah... and not confusing at all. thanks for this chapter... it make may day.
| Ken chapter 12 . 3/1
I forgot I'll give you 4.9 in this chapter. I got confuse between luck and look that's why I need to re read it again.
Over all, your really are great...
| Ken chapter 12 . 3/1
Lazlo to the rescue! Very interesting, indeed. The plot is getting better. I'm happy that Marcus plan's failed. what is he planning next? Will Olinda knows about Lazlo's identity soon? I got a feeling that Olinda will be paired to Lazlo in this fanfiction...
Wow mentioning Jeane's name is good. Who are the other suikoden character will you mention next?
| Yami no Majou077 chapter 17 . 3/1
Great as ever. My favorite part of this chapter is none than Desmond's rescuing part. It's great! And Rose's plan is sure the important point of this one.
I wonder, is Lazlo loved Olinda? I always thought that it's better not to pair him up with any of the girls. Yeah, he derserves to love someone in his long life. But when i thought about the future of the pair i feel so heartbroken. It's heartless. I couldn't bear to see him suffers the pain of losing someone dear to him, especially after he lost Snowe. Nah...but that's my personal opinion. Just go ahead with your idea. I'm sure it would be great.
| MagnumZ chapter 17 . 3/1
Lazlo is better to be an action star rather than a romantic guy eh. For the favorite part I like the part when Lazlo wear his suits and said he is look like a bird LOL I want to see that, and the rescuing part is the best for me.
The first time I saw this chapter I feel excited and read it already and after reading it I got disappointed, it is not because this is bad but because I want more story from you. I'm planning to read it until the end. I'll be hanging here for a while eh. I'm hoping many great chapters will come.
| dion19 chapter 17 . 3/1
Great chapter as always XD
I love it about Olinda and Cyrah and their memories together..they are so close to each other and care about each other too..remind me with my sister XD
Damn, I wanted to see Lazlo's suit too..did he still wore his bandana?in his suit..I almost forgot that there are Razril knight with them..lol..
The party part too..I can imagine Lazlo and Olinda dancing together..but then if they love each other, Lazlo immortal right..poor Olinda..poor Lazlo..
I'm sorry..english isn't my first language..lol..good luck for the next chapter XD
| GIC chapter 17 . 3/1
Hooorrrraaaaayyyy New Chapter.
You asking what is my favorite part... Well my favorite part is when Amoz Came to stop the kissing thing hahahahaha... and Also the girl talk part is my favorite maybe because I'm a girl too hahahaha...
What about you My Precious Writer?
Take care... I'll be waiting for the next chapter...