Reviews for The Punishment of the Sun
AoiKishi chapter 1 . 2/10
hi Milkandchocolate!
thanks for reading my fic.
thanks soo much :)
Yami no Majou077 chapter 32 . 1/20
ohh...this story has come to an end...it has been a long time, i'm so happy this story end so peacefully. and the ending, and epilogue are great. love it, and thank you for this great story.
Bob chapter 31 . 1/19
Great work. Man this is just awesome
Guest chapter 32 . 1/19
This is like the best fanfiction I have ever read about suikoden. I can't wait to see what u do next. Shame u can't publish this it make a great novel !
Guest chapter 32 . 1/17
THE GOOD THING ABOUT THE ENDING IS THAT IT ENDS IN A WELL PROPER MANNER. GOOD JOB!
Milkandchocolate chapter 32 . 1/15
I like this epilogue hahaha...
While reading every word, sentence and paragraph I enjoyed it I also imagine the ending where the characters picture, name and ending is displayed at my T.V. screen.

The postscript It is also fun as it ever be...

Will Siemon appear in your next story?

Thank you for writing this great story... I hope many reads this story...
Milkandchocolate chapter 31 . 1/15
Wow! Nice ending...
Punishing Lazlo like that Awwwwww!
Anyway Over all the ending is great I like it.

I think Lazlo's is so peacefull while his laughing...
MagnumZ chapter 30 . 1/14
Nice job. Your doing good.
MagnumZ chapter 29 . 1/14
Another great chapter
Milkandchocolate chapter 30 . 1/13
There are typo errors but still this is great as ever. It had many exciting part that made me smile and it is not boring to read.

The part that I like most is the battle of the Moth and Lazlo's fourth summoning spell the headless angel.

Over all every detail is precise and I don't know how to describe it but this is great...

Take care...
Milkandchocolate chapter 29 . 1/13
The Sun Rune can go to where the twilight and the dawn rune is how?

I remember the hole under the land and is that the hole near rainwall if I remembered correctly.

Hahahaha I love this XD I remember Freyjadour fighting in the ruins with the hardest boss in the game.

Thanks for the update I'm really glad you update it...
Mearn-Tahl chapter 2 . 1/9
Its been awhile since I've read FF, and when I found your lovely fic, I couldn't stop reading, stories regarding the hero from Suikoden 4 are my favorites. Nice job. :)
GIC chapter 1 . 1/7
I'm excited for the new chapter XD
suiko2fan2 chapter 27 . 1/4
I am nearly done. Been busy over the holidays doing other stuff. I am about to put the final touches on the last part of this battle. This final section was so big I'll prob divide it up into 3 parts to make it more manageable to read.
Guest chapter 28 . 1/4
omg this story is amazing! I hope you have a new chapter soon.
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