|Reviews for Persona 3: Fairly English Story|
| Kuchinawa911 chapter 19 . 8/12/2012
So far a great story. Although you put the word violation instead of volition in one part, it's still an interesting story.
| Guest chapter 108 . 8/6/2012
| P.T. Piranha chapter 9 . 7/29/2012
I saw the L joke coming mere seconds before it happened.
Anyway, serious mode:
This story is already long done, but I'm reviewing anyway. I like these first chapters. I heard something changes majorly a bit further in, but I'll let it take me by surprise. Aside from a few spelling and grammar things that slipped through the cracks during your revisions, I don't see a lot of problems so far.
I like what you're doing with Minato. My compliment had a bit more to it, but I was getting lost in my comparisons and just kept it simple.
I like how you had the other characters speak Japanese whenever Minato wasn't familiar with them or when he's not entirely focused. It reminds me that they're in Japan, and actually gives me a few ideas.
I'm pretty sure his surname A-R-I-S-A-T-O, but since MC's generally agreed upon name isn't even canon, it's really not an issue at all.
I look forward to the other chapters you have already written.
| Orpheaus Telos chapter 80 . 7/16/2012
The game is played by everyone and not just y'all in England. Now to explain it a bit better everyone plays it but is not actuvily playing until you know the basic rule of the game. And yes it is that simple.
| shikamarurulez1 chapter 22 . 7/8/2012
If you're still on the site, I want you to know I love this story! just read the first 22 chapters in a couple hours, on a roll...too bad it's 2 AM here, I should stop soon... I like your Minato, he fits well with the "Jack of All Trades" personality roulette you go through while playing. Given Junpei's personality and the humor in the story, I hope Minato gets Lilith at some point, since you showed with Naga that Junpei isn't above checking out other people's persona. Too bad the story is finished, cause I'll be sad if you didn't write it in... One last thing, no more Chidori? Aww! Based on the voices of the english voice actors, Minato and Sasuke are the same person! Ah well, love your humor in any case. Keep being awesome!
| Arkytal chapter 2 . 7/4/2012
Out of boredom, I'm reading Fairly English Story again. Seeing as you'll be back from you mission relatively soon (EIGHT MORE MONTHS!), I want to be re-familiarized with the plot as you've dictated it, so when For Every Soul finally gets updated, I won't be sitting there drooling, wondering what the hell just happened.
| BloodTrinity chapter 87 . 6/26/2012
Or you could have just used,"Nanja KORA!" it kinda means What the Hell? or Dafuq?
| BloodTrinity chapter 18 . 6/23/2012
...He just had to taunt the reaper didn't he?
| D chapter 37 . 5/20/2012
"Well, Might be tough if one more shows up."
"Tch. Guess We'll just have to kill 'em all before that happens."
"Wait, you're fighting too?" I turned to look at him size up a stop sign.
Look here: watch?vmMW6QYcPVBY
| D chapter 37 . 5/20/2012
I found this mask thing interesting, in Persona 2, didn't Tatsuya wear "masks" as portrayed in the OP?
Not just as a shadow, but it seemed as a demon as well.
Will there be demon contracts?
| D chapter 32 . 5/20/2012
TATSUYA IS BADASS. ALL HANDS DOWN. XDDDD
| D chapter 30 . 5/20/2012
GASP! *fangirl squeal!*
PERSONA 1! I LOVE U NOW!
:D Will Tatsuya appear?
| That is all chapter 28 . 5/17/2012
| greek fanatic chapter 80 . 5/8/2012
Actually, Icarus was the son of Daedalus, who was exiled for angering a king, and then imprisoned and forced to work by a diff. king. Icarus died, but Daedalus lived, and engaged in a self-righteous angst-fest.
| Gstar391 chapter 40 . 5/7/2012
If you really want an unbeatable wall, look up way of the rattlesnake by Darthemius. The guys insane, less than a year and over 1k reviews.