Reviews for A Proper Celebration
knightandbooks chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
Thank you! I love Romione smut especialy if it involves food and kitchen sex. Im hoping you can make it a 2 shot or make 2 sequals of the suggestec ending shower sex an a last one of their last round of birthday sex in bed. The one thing i love is when its descriptive sn when theres dialouge in during the sex which i found you did brilliantly. Thanks
ravenclawgirl27 chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
Rosie and Hugo were just adorable. And Ron is such an amazing Daddy! Good thing they were able to clean the house up in time.

The R/Hr sex was just scorching! Hermione is one lucky woman to be married to such a wonderful man!
Meisterburger chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
great story, a wonderful collection of both family moments and ron hermione passion
idol269 chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
This was great, tender, sweet, and hot all in the same story!
TMBlue chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
This was great, as usual. I really loved the bits with Ron and the kids... so cute :) And the counter!sex... Mmmmm
felixfelish46 chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
When Ron says "Have Mercy" the first thing I thought of was Uncle Jesse on full house, but i don't think they would ever use that saying in quite the same manner on the show... hehe
heavenly-vixen chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
Ok, so it's official. I'm a massive fan of your writing. Another fabulous fic. Just great. I love your vision of Ron and Hermione. Its beautiful, sweet, passionate, and most of all, full of love. Just perfect. ]
untouchablerave chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
Absolutely loved this, great work! The kids were so cute :)
Mandy ChE chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
This is hot, hilarious, and sweet all at the same time. Very well written too. Overall, excellent job!
PorcelainNinja chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
Aww, this was both sweet (home life, kids, cake-making) and sexy (duh), I LOVED it!

Funny bits:

"rather lopsided and slightly crunchy birthday cake"...LOL! Why didn't Ron take out the cat hair/eggshells, that sounds...delicious...I guess?

"damn damn damn my daddy said damn" that's soo cute and realistic!

"we'll save water if we [shower] together" :D I'm /sure/ Ron would be concerned about that. but it's funny!

cool details:

so cool how you're so specific from both their POVs, loved the stairs bit, also the part about "that Shakespeare bloke," LOL! that's cool how they play wizard chess with their dad, and how rose loves ron doing her hair, never even stopped to consider that! also cool how Ron learned cleaning/cooking stuff from his mum, that's funny and adds just the right amount of details, also i love the english-stuff, "telly," "Mummy," etc. And that's so cool how Hermione memorizes details to help her live through bad times, so cute!

also funny: "cake? did you have your mother over?"

"Thank Merlin"

"If she's in that study doing work again..."

Ending: Very specific but I loved it!
lachambre11 chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
This was perfection, girlie! The ""If you don't want me to put things in my mouth, you shouldn't go waving them about." just gave me the dirtiest thoughts, and I love how you had them turn their lines on the other. Ron and Hermione kitchen!sex was very hot, and the sweet parts, with Rosie, Hugo and the cake-Crookshanks-throwing accident was delightful as well D
deathroses chapter 1 . 7/8/2009

I LOVED the banter between the kids and their parents! Ron's love for his children were very well portrayed and some of my favorite bits! The lemon at the end was perfectly placed! Lovely work!
silverbirch chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
A very good story, it had all the elements.
MaNdErS20100 chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
Great one-shot! _
wow60 chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
This was a lovely, hot and steamy fic - really good as well. :)
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