|Reviews for A Misunderstanding|
| Dracodraco100 chapter 10 . 3/26/2012
When Gyarados dove into the lake, gyarados's protect wouldn't have covered the whole lake, so pikachu's thunder would have electrocuted him
| poka chapter 11 . 4/18/2011
A good story. Definately liked the plot. Two things though
in one of your chapters you wrote this:
Soon, Ash was finished eating and began telling Misty about all the new Pokémon he caught. He also told her about all the new Pokémon he had caught.
The last sentence is redundant. Also, Bayleef is a female.
| Lord Anubis Judge of the dead chapter 10 . 3/14/2011
interesting. all that is left is the epiloge but the story itself was pretty interesting. this is actually the only story i have found so far that has misty and charizard interact at all and i wonder why there isn't more. clearly it has potential. anyway coming from a regular reader of fanfiction i would have to say that this story gets a 8 out of 10 because you actually had plot and character development. while not the best fanfic story i have read this one was good and i have to say that it was definately above average wasn't a bad read. i look forward to reading more from you and have a nice day.
| EchidnaPower chapter 10 . 2/28/2011
Well...I suppose the battle was ok in terms of excitement, but it definitely felt like it could've been longer. I mean the battle between Corsola and Bayleef lasted only a few seconds it seemed. And Pidgeot seemed to get forgotten, Charizard was so determined to show up Pidgeot and then it never happened. As for Ash and Misty getting married...that seemed like a pointless add on in this situation. You didn't give any time for their relationship to develop, you just threw that in near the end. Overall the story was ok though
| Cindy M 19 chapter 10 . 2/27/2011
what is one of the best pokemon battle write in the fan fiction i love the battle
| Glittering Turquoise chapter 10 . 2/26/2011
Wow! Cool pokemon battle! I'm so happy that Charizard won! Great ending!
| Mizuki hikari chapter 9 . 2/23/2011
I love this fanfiction!, plz continue!.
| Fan Boy 101 chapter 9 . 2/6/2011
Sweet! I can't believe it's almost over. Looking foward to the final chapter.
| AK1028 chapter 9 . 1/28/2011
Cha. I've been reading this for a while and I must admit it is getting good. Keep up the great work!
| Fan Boy 101 chapter 8 . 1/12/2011
Sweet chapter. Looking foward to more.
| Fan Boy 101 chapter 7 . 11/28/2010
Hey there. Sorry for the late review. Awesome chapter! Oh man, it's almost over? Well, sure hope you update soon.
| Cerridwen-Maiden chapter 7 . 11/11/2010
FINALLY. ash and misty, together again!
| Steveaaml chapter 5 . 11/8/2010
I LOVE the idea of Charizard trying to get Misty and Ash to hang out again.
| Cindy M 19 chapter 6 . 10/4/2010
update soon, i love the history
| kenokosan chapter 6 . 10/2/2010
yay! I love this chappy!