Reviews for Control
DeathByFandom13 chapter 1 . 3/20/2016
INCREDIBLE WORK! I love how you brought in Beyond. GO YOU!
XAdorkablexXxHotshotX chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
So sad :-( But so well written! I really liked it when he said this The cold sting of rejection hit him hard as he came to the realization that he would never hold L again.

Sad! Great!
MisbehavingBubbles chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
First things first...

THIS line?

All of the small smiles, the little waves of aberrant warmth, even the moans of pleasure, were all meant for someone else.

Wowzers. I am blown away by this! I think the way you showed Light's ego crumbling is very realistic... I can relate to his hurt. It's utterly amazing! :D
hermionegranger47393 chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
Omg I just died. This was SO good! A little bit of everything lol!
br0flove chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
Poor L..
Marion T chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
So amazing!

I think you're a very, very gifted writer, Veterization. You're one of the few authors I'm going to advise;

Get out of the fanfiction business. You need to write something you can take full ownership over because you CAN make thousands!

KarenFox agencies would love you. Go visit their site :)
heatherness1324 chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
lovefan81 chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
I really liked it!
Technophobic.Shin chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
Wow! Not enough people ship this, great job!
HelplessRomantic chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
Gorgeous. So much depth and meaning behind this, you are probably the best author I know when it comes to bringing emotion into your stories. It's very well done!
ReachIntoTheSky chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
That was excellent. Truly excellent. I love love LOVE your LxB stories! :)
TeaDanceMacabre chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
This was amazing, your writing style is beautiful. You never use the same descriptions twice, you always find another way to describe something. It was refreshing and I loved the story behind it too!
LadyPurple chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
So I've been following your page for a while, and I love your ships. I love your stories.

And I finally read your bio! And after months of convincing myself to just 'ask her if she wants to talk', I'm doing it! Private message me back if you want to, but I think you're just awesome! ;P

Like the story too!
MiloVentimigliaIsLove chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
Wow. Ive been blown away. *is blown away*

Gorgeous stuff! I love the way you wrote this, very enigmatic.

So here's my proposition. Review reply/FF PM back to me on this if you like the idea.

I would love to translate this into French so more people can enjoy it. I rarely ever over this, so I hope you don't think I randomly go around asking authors for me to replicate their works. I would dedicate it to you, of course.

And if you still want to talk afterward, you'll know my page. I think you sound really cool from your bio and I'd love to get to know you.
JuliaKerns5 chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
Beautiful. Just beautiful

You never fail to make my jaw drop... loved this! D
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