|Reviews for MSLN Test Dummies|
| robert.pavelchek chapter 1 . 11/23/2013
Ooooooooh, I am ENJOYING this!
| pataponvideo chapter 11 . 9/26/2013
Love i want more form this.
| Number III chapter 11 . 8/8/2013
That, was the single most awesome chapter of any story I've ever read. Good job, I'm favoriting this.
| Takeshi Yamato chapter 11 . 6/24/2013
PLEASE continue this story!
It is incredibly epic and Hilarious and I want to see more! :D
Azure Knight of the Raging Tempest
| jgkitarel chapter 11 . 11/19/2012
Heh, M1A1 Abrams Main Battle Tank, with 120mm NATO standard smoothbore cannon, firing depleted uranium sabot, HE, HEAT, HEAP and so on. Yeah, Whoopass exported from the USA.
This series nicely deconstructs the who magic is inherently superior to kinetic weapons. While a prepared mid-level mage may be able to take an anti-tank round to the face, that's when they're prepared. Now, add in several firing at once, well you'll have years of training and experience turned into a stain.
Anyway, you intending to continue this?
| Lord Shadowstorm chapter 11 . 7/14/2012
A great fanfiction and a great ending of this chapter. I am saddened that it seems to be dead though.
If there was a rating system here on then I would've rated this 11 out of 10. I hope that you'll continue this fic soon.
| Justin Brett chapter 7 . 12/20/2011
So was this meant to be the part where Roland apologizes for his actions? Because...he wasn't really apologizing, or at least not for an actual fault of his. He was sorry for not taking MORE authority over the situation - if he had, everything would probably have been hunky-dory instead of what did happen, right? And Hayate just sits there and accepts it, like there's no problem at all with that statement? Please.
| Alex phoenix Wing chapter 11 . 9/27/2011
any chance of this story getting new chapters?
You leave the readers hanging.
| I-En-Tee-Jay chapter 2 . 4/21/2011
Nuclear weapons are Mass based? Wouldn't they be, well, Nuclear based? Cause well, a prompt critical nuclear fission reaction that may or may not lead to a nuclear fusion reaction doesn't have all that much to do with kinectic impact.
Just a little note, aside from that, nothing to complain about.
| Justin Brett chapter 6 . 4/7/2011
So I have to ask; if you're splitting up people in a potentially dangerous situation, wouldn't you have someone used to working with Hayate go with her, given that she's the most fragile member of the team? Crash didn't seem to be aware of her lack of defense until Roland mentioned it, and his equipment was damaged besides.
I mean, someone might think you didn't put Vita or Signum there in order to let her get easily taken out and prove your point about mages in the series - by things happen to allow that. But I'm sure that's not what happened at all here, right?
Also, a villain isn't scary when you introduce him singing along to Still Alive, you idiot.
| Jerrac chapter 11 . 3/1/2011
Great story. You still working on it?
| Warp Ligia Obscura chapter 11 . 12/30/2010
... Is there any chance of continuing this? I've seen fics dead longer come back to life. Mr. Kage is a very interesting villain and I would like to see the full extent of the plan come into play.
| Irish12345 chapter 11 . 11/6/2010
I have been reading the story and I love it. I love the interaction between the characters and the stories setting.
I want to see more of Crash and Fox and I want to see how rowland deal with the trator.
| enderverse chapter 11 . 6/22/2010
I haven't even seen any Nanoha and I love this story.
| Kumoatsu chapter 1 . 5/12/2010
You know, the way that you are describing his ability it seems as if he has most if not almost all his power tied into indescriminate destruction of property. Kind of like a well I can't think of anything right now to compare it to. But the way it looks, its almost as if he is designed to do one job really well to almost the exclusion of everything else Oh! Like wonderweiss from bleach! That weird arancar that is designed to take out the captain commanders ability only. He can fight kind of, but he is generally more of a character that is recognized on the side rather then actually confronted. Well back to the point is it going to get "discovered" that he is really about SSS rank but its mostly tied into,... well random acts of mayham and destruction. Then they later unlock it? You are kind of forshadowing it. After all later on he barely touches a barrier which someone had been leaning on quite easily and without fuss before,... and a screw JUMPED out of its niche onto the ground. So Yeah...
Just saying that it is a little unbelievable. Of course I like your story becouse of that factor, and good characterization.