Reviews for U Plus I Equals 69
TheFluffyBakura chapter 1 . 2/18/2015
This is great! XDD WHERE did you get these pickup lines from?
Insert-somthing-creative-here chapter 1 . 7/19/2014
Did it hurt when you fell from heaven? ;)
Chris Shino chapter 1 . 7/10/2014
*trying hard to breathe again* *failing miserably due to exessive laughter*

Really, I'd never have thought I'd have so much fun reading a story with pick up lines - thank you so much for writing it in first place!
keiko-uchiha chapter 1 . 12/22/2012
This story... made my day! I just couldn't stop giggling. Thank you for writing this story!
YouMakeMyDay chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
haha, the roxas pick up line, I died. Also, even though I've heard most of these, they're even more hilarious because I could definitely see Hayner trying these as a joke. xD
passiveInferno chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
This is the first time in years I've been seriously choking from laughing this hard from a fic, and I'm still regaining my breath here. I APPLAUD YOU WITH ALL MY MIGHT.
WindRush chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
LOL, omg, the ending was the best!
moatilliata chapter 1 . 11/17/2011
I FRICKIN LOVED IT XDDDDDDD seriously, i usually dont laugh at fanfictions, but this... THIS. I laughed like... like... idk BUT THANKS ;-; you're funny

"I'm going to kill you." HEE~~HEEHE
unusedaccount1177 chapter 1 . 9/17/2011
LMAO. You totally rock. That really brigtened my day. Thanks for the laughs. Keep writing.
PhantomAvenger chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
I live for cheesy pickup lines! You have no idea how much I enjoyed this! You just made my whole day!

[put hand on closest shoulder] Does the parrot go on this shoulder?[stretch arm across shoulders] Or this shoulder? (personal favorite, those who know me have probably had it used on them...)

You are like a candy bar: half sweet and half nuts.

Excuse me, but does this smell like chloroform to you?

Hello how are you? [Fine] Hey, I didn't ask you how you looked!

Did you clean your pants with Windex? I can practically see myself in them.

Did you fart, cause you blew me away.

I don't have a library card, but do you mind if I check you out?

I didn't know that angels could fly so low!

Is your name "swiffer"? 'Cause you just swept me off my feet.

Excuse me, but you dropped something back there" (What?) "This conversation, lets pick it up later tonight.

Are you going to kiss me or do I have to lie to my diary?

Are you cold? You look like you could use some hot chocolate... Well, here I am!

If stars would fall everytime I would think of you, the sky would soon be empty.

Damn, if being sexy was a crime, you'd be guilty as charged!

You know, Dr. Phil says I'm afraid of commitment...Want to help prove him wrong?

Your lips look so lonely... Would they like to meet mine?

Baby, you're so sweet, you put Hershey's outta business.

Did the sun come out or did you just smile at me?

So there you are! I've been looking all over for YOU, the woman of my dreams!

Do you believe in love at first sight, or should I walk by again?
Zadski chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
This was so funny xD And it reminded me of two cheesy old pick up lines...

"Hey baby, my name is Pogo, wanna hop on my stick?"


"Can't think of anything to say? Well, how about you take a seat on my lap and we see what pops up?"

anonymoosefangirl chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
Hhaaha these are so cheesy! Great one shot especially since its a dose of one of my fave KH pairings.

Are you wearing astronaut pants? Because your butt is out of this world!
inhx chapter 1 . 3/29/2011
Oh my gosh.

I'm actually dying from laughter at the moment.

I love this story and it shall forever be remembered as my first Seifer/Hayner fanfic in a line of many more to come. ;)
Vithian chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
Here's a pickup line for you!

"Let's play Titanic. You be the iceberg, and I'll go down on you."

Yeah, not exactly original, but hey, I like it.

This had my laughing so much, thank you for that.

crazy.yaoi.girl chapter 1 . 2/11/2011

I almost died of laughter!



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