Reviews for Makeover, Makeover
Silver Souhait chapter 1 . 12/25/2009
XD Priceless. I could totally see this happening, too. Excellent!
d.gray-fan chapter 1 . 9/11/2009
This story was so great and so funny.I can imagine this perfectly.

I love the "STRIKE" part and every single line!

You are souch a good writer.

Please continue with your great work.
DeactivatedMidori chapter 1 . 9/9/2009
Dear lord, you know how hard was not to burst out laughing while reading this at late hours? Thanks for mking such a cute KroryxMiranda fic, I really love tht pairing! Also, you made them really in character, that's something that Komui and Lavi would totally do!
Misty Narumi chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
very adorable and funny

yay for KroryxMiranda! :)
Darkc chapter 1 . 7/16/2009
im so sorry i meant to say a thousand over one hundred but it erased my zero's plz update soon

_darkcarnival
Darkcarnival chapter 1 . 7/16/2009
so sorry i ment to but a thousand over a hundred but my zero's were gone DX hope u update soon
F4aw2v chapter 1 . 7/16/2009
u actually made me like kroryxmiranda

love how u write it this is the type of story i find enjoyable 10/100

kanda got involved u must put that in a flashback
SolarTrigger chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
This was cute! I love this pairing. :3

Lavi had me rolling!

“Pirates walk like this instinctively. Because they're pirates and know they're awesome.”

That was my favorite line. xD
Fibonacci to Infinity chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
Adorable, halarious & down right awsome! I want to read more from you!
waterlit chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
nice story! i'm not really a fan of K/M, but yay! it was so very amusing. and was that an implied A/L i saw? xD
Rika the Strange chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
This is fantastic XD I officially love Pirate!Krory and Lavi's demented imagination. Poor Krory getting socked in the jaw by Allen was fantastic, as was his Cross-like walk. Trout-faced!Komui was pretty epic as well. Makes you wonder how the heck he knows all this stuff, though... Anyways, great job. Loved it!