Reviews for prom
Sophia Xerxes chapter 3 . 9/15/2016
Really awesome
Especially the songs are fab
Deleting Account12321 chapter 3 . 7/29/2009
aw Deidara died :( anyway it wasnt really a Sasuke Naruto story...
JSinuYasha chapter 2 . 7/15/2009
lmao! Gaara just randomly stabbed somebody. I'm kinda following this story but I'm pretty confused. Is this story really complete?
Leutheria chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
A good idea, but there are a lot of gramatical and spelling errors.

Don't forget your commas, periods, and other bits of punctuation. Some punctuation is easily passed over, but eventually the sentences stop making sense.

Capitalization is another thing. All sentences start with a capital letter, that includes dialogue. And first and surnames should also start with a capital letter.

I also suggest you make it longer and add some more details.

Great job, keep up the work and may fix your future stories with the tips tips I gave you here and your writing with surely get better and better over time!