Reviews for Shred for my Thrust
Blueberry Absinth chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
I couldn't understand the end of the Soifon Ggio fight: Ggio just deflected? Sort of confusing~

Even though I loved Apache and Ggio's exchanges, I'd like some more detail~ For the squeal part, you know xD

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Dante 101 chapter 3 . 7/9/2009
Ggio's now leader is he?

No way! You kill off most of Ichigo and his friends like that?

No! You killed off Nel also!

Arturo got his revenge after all.

Well the other two pairings were not that surprising.

Dude! More Romance!
Dante 101 chapter 2 . 7/8/2009
Well Findor got a sword stuck through his head and Avirama got freaken beheaded.

Didn't think Tousen cares that much.

Well of coarse Orihime is needed.

Watch and protect you. Grammar!
Evil Tree chapter 2 . 7/8/2009
A nice second chapter, but it still semmes to be missing detail.

It also seems a bit rushed.

But still please update soon :D
Dante 101 chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
I guess I'm a sort of a fan of Soi Fon.

You might want to work on your grammar here.

What? I can't imagine Ggio saying that to Barragan.

Well, it's implied that judging from the size of Ggio's second form, he might have lost any speed advantages he has.

Well, Ggio actually probably didn't care for his fellow fraccion at all.

Well, it'd be interesting to see some sort of history between the two. You know like flashbacks.

Her sisters? Well I guess they have some sort of a sisterly relationship throught their loyality to Halibel.

Well she and her fellow fraccion might have not gotten burned if they hadn't charged him in a suicide attack.

Well of coarse that wasn't his strongest attack.

Well, I thought Apache would have a sort of a better reaction to their deaths.

Did you plan to kill off those two?

Why still call him Barragan-sama? I mean Ggio quited being his fraccion.
Evil Tree chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
Ok first chapter, although you caould add more discription in it along with speach, like describing Apaches burns.

Glad someone made a fic where Halibel's fraccion survived :D