|Reviews for Instability|
| ToothTooth chapter 3 . 7/6
This is fucking brilliant. It's a masterpiece so far. I cannot even begin to fathom words anymore. I love Sam and your characterisation on him, how you write his relationship with Bumblebee. I love Bumblebee too. This is perfection my friend and I can't wait to read more.
| Saria chapter 15 . 5/23
I've always wondered what the gift Bumblebee gave to Sam was...
| heather chapter 15 . 4/28
WHY HAVE YOU STOPPED WRITING?!
I know you're out there and alive; at least you were 2 months ago.
So why have you updated anything?!
I want to know what happens next!
If your not going to finish completely writing out the story, at least give us an outline of what was supposed to happen. Please!
I've got a bunch of theories about what's going on but I want to know what really happens.
| gima2618 chapter 15 . 3/20
Love it! Plz need to know what is going to happen next
| QueenAlanya chapter 15 . 8/20/2015
This is easily one of the best fanfics I've ever read. It was all so thought out and well researched and had me on the edge of my seat the entire time
| DoomCabbit chapter 15 . 2/15/2015
I love this fic so much. It is just so, soooo good! I love the torture Sam goes through dealing with his emotions and fears and struggling to find his balance in a situation that is never in his control, struggling to come to grips with what he's been dealing with and what he's being thrown into currently and never given enough time to properly breathe and yeeeesss suffer, Sam, suffer!
Ugh, and there's so much that hasn't been answered yet! What's the deal with Sam and Bee's bond, how'd that happen? Who's that voice that keeps talking to them? Who's the false Prime? What was that thing Optimus wanted Wheeljack to build for Sam? Was that Skywarp that went all prophet of doom on Bee? Is Mikaela doing okay? The heck is Perceptor doing obeying Megs, wasn't he an Autobot in G1 (what went down in-story to have Percy fall in with Megatron if this is the same character)? Humans are the next Quintessons?!
This story is SO GOOD and that teaser of a SEQUEL at the end of the last chapter just makes me want to shake my computer because what do you mean there's no more chapters? It's been near 5 years?! Noooo please, I have to know what happens next!
| Zombiehorse2 chapter 15 . 1/9/2015
I love how you conducted the story so far, you have great talent, I can't wait to read more. Keep up the great work, and thanks for making me smile.
| Von chapter 15 . 12/28/2014
Next Spring, eh? ;)
I hope this story continues some day. I know it's been 4 years and last report was that you'd lost your fire for it but I'm glad that it hasn't stopped because you're actually... you know. :S Deceased!
I respect your view to sticking with canon partners (although I don't see anything wrong with changing them in and of itself - especially when canon partners don't seem to make sense) and not making slash willy-nilly. Myself, I find any relationship to be frustrating in the extreme to read about because too often they're grandiose affairs that just waste time when more interesting things could be happening. I do still genuinely hope that Mikaela either dies, remains in a coma or breaks up with Sam in a few years when they've grown beyond their current mindsets/post-adventure attachment. (And hey - her dumping him and leaving Wheelie behind is actually canon, so odds are good eh? ;) )
I hope you haven't been discouraged by all the complaining aholes (myself included - I take whinging and complaining to the olympic level) and that some day your spark for this reignites. I'm burningly curiously about how the whole bond/unicron/decepticon virus thing is gonna turn out and I really do hope that Sam's experience with Wheeljack has helped to break through his little mental block of random paranoid suspicion and self-revulsion. (Although I think Ratchet hinted that some of his over-intense behaviour/emotions was in reaction to the beginning bond? Or was all the 'Bee can't like me because I'm scum' stuff purely Sam?)
Either way, thanks for a great story that I re-read at least once a year.
| Transformersfun chapter 15 . 12/26/2014
I want to read the next chapter, like now. I've already read this story like two, three times.(ok the last one i only read the parts,i thought, was best.) and i really want to Know what happens next, like, why do megatron need Sam, why the decepticons have created a feak Sam, what will bumblebee do when he founds out that Sam is not with wheeljack(will Bee go rampage on wheeljack for not taking Sam to NEST), and Micaela, who knows what happens to her after this(well, you should Know, but you Know what i mean.)
I really want to Know those things now! ugh.
I Know you can't answer me (because i don't have an account) but i'll ask you anyway, when do you think the next Chapter will Be done? This year or next year? Next year is soon here anyways so the time won't be that long but when next year?! In the beginning of january or (dare i think it?) sometime in februar!? Please say that it will be soon.
Well it was kinda what i wanted to say so, i guess this is goodbye "sad music in the background, zoom in on the tear" :'(
Just one last thing!(that you won't be able to answer, either) have you seen TF4?! :D -(smile)
And i really like this story, sometime i don't understand, but it stil work. Really like this story :)
Okey, now for real... Bye
| Hi there chapter 15 . 12/14/2014
Your story is so well written. Thanks to you Optimus is no longer my favorite character, it's now Wheeljack! I got totally sucked in to this story and was so upset when there were no more chapters.
I dont quite understand Bee in this story. Does he really not want this bond or is he just terrified of it? Is he scared of himself for wanting the bond so badly? I really hope i find out one day.
I have never been a fan of sam and mikaela, i much prefer Sam Optimus or Sam Bee, so personally i dont care if Mikaela dies in this.
This voice inside sams head is way interesting. It does not sound like Bee and im not sure if the Allspark is sentient. My guess is that sam absorbed the allspark and it is reformatting him somewhat into a computer and sam can now link with vector sigma, that computer control thing from cybertron.
I will never find out the truth though.
I am devastated that the last update was 2010 so im guessing this story is dead as a dodo. Shame, it is brilliant.
| Lobato chapter 1 . 10/25/2014
That story is AWESOME! Why had you abandoned it? It's one of the best fics on Bee/Sam friendship I've read!
| Victoria.Rae chapter 15 . 9/4/2014
This story is one of THE BEST I have read in a long time and I don't mean out of just fanfiction. I can only hope you hope to continue and update it soon, I don't think I can live with this cliffhanger!
| Little Karma chapter 15 . 7/18/2014
Ok i just power read threw this whole thing in about 2 days. I love Optimus seeing Sam as his son. The bond between Bee and Sam has me really feeling for them when they aren't being complete A-holes to each other. And while i never really cared for Mikaela as a character i do like how Sam see's her, and how they revolve around each other.
Can't wait to see the next chapter and to see how the Deicticreeps use Sam.
| kirara the great chapter 15 . 7/12/2014
NO, OH NO I got attached to and abandoned story! but its really wonderful and I dare hope for more
| Kiota-chan chapter 15 . 7/7/2014
hug thanks for an awesome story, will it ever be finished as promised in the last chapter?