|Reviews for Instability|
| InsanityItself chapter 1 . 1/14
Oh man your story is amazing! The way you write out Sam's emotions is just unbelievable! Also I'm usually not a fan of SamXMikeala but the way you wrote them made me fall in love!
| jpgFury chapter 15 . 1/4
I'm sad to see this peter out here - it's such a fantastic story!
The plot is enthralling and it's so well written that I spent the last couple of days reading it practically non-stop. The characters, even though not their G1 personalities exactly, are so rich and engaging that you can't help being drawn in. The section with Jolt and Arcee was so heart-wrenching!
I even almost like Sam after reading this.
Please tell me if it's posted anywhere else that I might find...
| kattenbelletje chapter 15 . 12/21/2013
Noooooooooooo! Don't stop at the clifhanger. I realy love this story, I want to know how it ends. Pretty please.
| Bee fan chapter 14 . 9/24/2013
please please please continue!
| Guest chapter 15 . 9/24/2013
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| SerenDPetty chapter 15 . 9/13/2013
I don't know if you are still checking this site. If you are still writing at all. The most recent update to your site was 4-18-12 and I stopped in to read 'Instability' today (9-13-13) on recomendation of DaemonicKitten. She said that your story was an inspiration and I have to say I agree.
The concepts you propose are truely unique. The cross-polination of programming between Sam and Bumblebee. Sam gets logic and trained battle reflexes while Bee gets intuition and free-form thinking... and who knows what else swaps over making both more than either alone. Bee's new alt-form of a Japanese Zero is a SWEET little plane! Sam and Mikaela getting married - over the PHONE - officiated by Jolt. The mirage decepticon as your deus-ex-machina getting the characters moving.
Could have been epic.
Instead you've left them for three years with Sam captured by Megatron, Mikaela in the hospital with unknown injuries, Bee FLYING! across Africa, Wheeljack running interference, and Optimus about to take a pretender drone into N.E.S.T.
You stated that you had the rest of the story finished. Promised a sequel.
It's breaking my heart. You got me to love these characters in a way that I hadn't thought of before.
And the sequel would be appreciated too.
Seren D. Petty
| Dawn Racer chapter 15 . 8/9/2013
WHAT THE FRAG?!
lol. Please don't kill Wheeljack, I love him. -pouts- Pretender? I wonder what this one could be planning. Perceptor is evil now? OMP! lol
Please update soon, I love this story so far.
| Dawn Racer chapter 14 . 8/9/2013
Oh Slag! Wheeljack, don't let him jump mech!
| Dawn Racer chapter 12 . 8/7/2013
So Bee was cruel to Sam because they are bonded?
Why was he cruel and silent to Sam?
| Dawn Racer chapter 9 . 8/4/2013
Hound was in here!
who was the white robot? I feel like I've seen him from somewhere..he sounds so familiar!
-pouts- Primus, their interaction hurt my spark.
| Dawn Racer chapter 8 . 8/3/2013
Intriguing. I really am enjoying your writing, it's captivating.
| Dawn Racer chapter 7 . 8/3/2013
Yay they made up!
| Dawn Racer chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
Awe, this is so sad and entrancing.
| Jessica chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
This story is great! Please write another chapter!
| lightbane1905 chapter 1 . 7/6/2013
I miss you, please come back