Reviews for Instability
Dark and Blue chapter 15 . 7/19/2017
It's so great ! Please, update soon ! Your story is so good !
CloudCarnivore chapter 15 . 7/5/2017
Whoa this is really good! Continue soon
Anonymous chapter 15 . 6/25/2017
Nice story, One of the best I've ever read. I've never commented on a story before but I wanted to say good job. I wanted to know how your project with this was going to turn out but it looks like you might not have finished it or gave up. But that's okay, everyone gets busy and not all projects work out. For my own selfish reasons I hope you finish the story; if not, good luck in whatever you do next. Good day, Good luck, and just have fun. (Sorry if I seem weird but sometimes I feel like some people need spoken nicely to for no reason other than they need a piece of niceness.)
KellieAM chapter 1 . 3/15/2017
I know the chances of you continuing is slim after so many years, your passion for transformers may have dimmed but I won't let that stop me from hoping you'll see this and post another! If not a chapter than at least your outline. Your writing is very captivating, the flashbacks, anxiety, but still Sams sharp tongue. The connections from everywhere drawing everything together it's so complex I can't begin to give you my thoughts on it. Just know that if you're alive and haven't died from whatever was making you ill, I truly appreciate your dedication and the time it took to get this far into the story.
Guest chapter 7 . 2/8/2017
Teddy chapter 15 . 11/14/2016
brilliant story so sad it was never finished.
LoveHopes chapter 15 . 9/29/2016
Well damn this is a good story. I know you haven't updated in years and don't expect you to. But it's highly interesting and your writing style and characterization is fantastic.
Guest chapter 9 . 8/31/2016
Ron's speech to Optimus has me crying brb I need issues
Guest chapter 7 . 8/31/2016
Woah I cannot even fathom words to describe how I'm feeling about your writing. It's perfection. Honestly, I cannot fault it. The part with Sam and Optimus had me crying because it was so moving and beautiful
gryphenvoid chapter 15 . 8/29/2016
I don't know if you will ever check the account this is linked to, but I needed to let you know that I rarely read a story twice. I have now just completed my third reread of this masterpiece (starting of course with your rewritten chapters then ending back over here).

This story is hands down the best and most unique Transformers story I have ever read. I love your interpretation and characterization of all the bots and how you manage to keep them so alien. I love how you have managed to capture Sam's spastic, anxiety and remind the reader that everything he has experienced would be terrifying as shit so of course he's going to have issues.

This story is almost 200,000 words long! I can't imagine the hours you spent on this. As I said, I don't know if you will ever see this, and I expect no reply, but in the off chance you ever get to see this...

Bravo. Standing ovation. I will be back to reread and heap subsequence praise upon you again in a few years, again.

(I'm fairly certain this is the first story I managed to pull myself out of the wood work to actually leave a comment for the author years ago)
ToothTooth chapter 3 . 7/6/2016
This is fucking brilliant. It's a masterpiece so far. I cannot even begin to fathom words anymore. I love Sam and your characterisation on him, how you write his relationship with Bumblebee. I love Bumblebee too. This is perfection my friend and I can't wait to read more.
Saria chapter 15 . 5/23/2016
I've always wondered what the gift Bumblebee gave to Sam was...
heather chapter 15 . 4/28/2016
I know you're out there and alive; at least you were 2 months ago.
So why have you updated anything?!
I want to know what happens next!
If your not going to finish completely writing out the story, at least give us an outline of what was supposed to happen. Please!
I've got a bunch of theories about what's going on but I want to know what really happens.
gima2618 chapter 15 . 3/20/2016
Love it! Plz need to know what is going to happen next
QueenAlanya chapter 15 . 8/20/2015
This is easily one of the best fanfics I've ever read. It was all so thought out and well researched and had me on the edge of my seat the entire time
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