Reviews for Instability
gatogirl1 chapter 15 . 4/20/2021
I really enjoy rereading this! You havea wonderful blend of descriptive action and heart breaking drama! I especially adore Optimus’s inner struggles as he decides what to do.

Thanks again for sharing your writing!
Guest chapter 9 . 9/1/2020
Christ Sam’s dad lecturing Optimus to be a good dad to him nearly broke my heart
Guest chapter 3 . 8/31/2020
Sam and Bee’s relationship isnadorable
LiLuAin chapter 15 . 6/21/2020
A great story! The best of this fandom! Wonderfully connect both worlds. It's amazing how you presented Sam's relationship with Bee. I love you for that! Seriously!
I found this story for the first time in 2015 and since then, sometimes I come back here and read the whole thing again.
I regret that there is no continuation ... The more that your last note even says about the next fanfic part :(
Well ... I still hope to see a new chapter someday. Although I wonder what happened that you suddenly stopped writing?
The story is so wonderful that every time I finish reading chapter 15 and I don't see 16 I feel like after breaking up.
I don't want to part with your story. I already know him by heart:(
I wish you much health and inspiration.
I squeeze hard, hoping that maybe my insignificant comment will change something ... Let you know that loyal fans are still waiting!
quietpagan chapter 9 . 3/18/2019
It took me
and a HALF
to get through this chapter. I've read this fic several times over and EVERY SINGLE TIME this chapter stresses me the heck out. I'm a stupidly empathetic reader and I had to watch half of a play on youtube, eat dinner, and do a damn load of laundry while trying to chew my way through Sam's horrible, terrible attempt to get Bumblebee to stay. THREE AND A HALF HOURS. You are an exceptionally emotive writer and your prose is so visceral that I can feel the guilt churning in my gut, feel sharp, icy fear when you write it, feel the cold terror and devastation. Your characterization, especially of Sam's inner monologue, is so incredibly spot-on. You don't shy away from grittiness and inelegant details and imperfection, which makes this one of my favorite stories. Your revised version is extremely promising, but I hope to one day read a new chapter of this. It's desolate, but filled with a frantic hope that clings to the inside of my mind long after I'm done reading it again. Thanks to you for your writing, mate.
I-Plead-Obsession chapter 12 . 2/9/2019
I was so happy, aaaand then disappointed. Not sure if I can continue reading since it's a SamxMic fic... blegh! I was under the hope it was a SamXBee fiction. It is so freaking good though :( i just loathe the pairing. Maybe... to stop people like myself from becomming overly invested it would be possible to add a pairing to this in the search or list it in the front page? Because now i'm horribly disappointed
horseflute89 chapter 1 . 1/4/2019
This story is absolutely fantastic. I know it's been many years since you've updated, but any chance you plan to continue the work?
EveryDream chapter 1 . 1/3/2019
Re-read this after years and its still one of the most amazing fics I've ever read if not the best. Your writing is phenomenal!
Camaraderiee chapter 14 . 12/28/2018
I rolled back around to this fic for the first time in a few years, but it's just as awesome as the first time I read it. :) You have the ability to write in a tone of voice that reads as thoughts, instead of omniscient third person- it pulls the reader in beautifully. I'm hoping you gain the inspiration to publish more in the future, thank you!
Thousandsmiles chapter 15 . 9/8/2018
Woah, this was pretty good. I think the interactions between Sam and the other auto bots as well as with his parents and mikela were a bit confusing at fist becuase Sam himself was confused. But once the story picked up it was great. I am sorely interested in seeing what happens. I would love to see mikelas side of things because she's never a coward. Is the strange voice Mirage? Also I like the throw back to Bee being a flyer in G1. Your barricade is both creepy and sad. I'm worrying if the storm is actually Unicron coming. I loved the speech Sam's father gave to Optimus. It was really lovely.
Darling Nova chapter 15 . 7/19/2017
It's so great ! Please, update soon ! Your story is so good !
CloudCarnivore chapter 15 . 7/5/2017
Whoa this is really good! Continue soon
Anonymous chapter 15 . 6/25/2017
Nice story, One of the best I've ever read. I've never commented on a story before but I wanted to say good job. I wanted to know how your project with this was going to turn out but it looks like you might not have finished it or gave up. But that's okay, everyone gets busy and not all projects work out. For my own selfish reasons I hope you finish the story; if not, good luck in whatever you do next. Good day, Good luck, and just have fun. (Sorry if I seem weird but sometimes I feel like some people need spoken nicely to for no reason other than they need a piece of niceness.)
KellieAM chapter 1 . 3/15/2017
I know the chances of you continuing is slim after so many years, your passion for transformers may have dimmed but I won't let that stop me from hoping you'll see this and post another! If not a chapter than at least your outline. Your writing is very captivating, the flashbacks, anxiety, but still Sams sharp tongue. The connections from everywhere drawing everything together it's so complex I can't begin to give you my thoughts on it. Just know that if you're alive and haven't died from whatever was making you ill, I truly appreciate your dedication and the time it took to get this far into the story.
Guest chapter 7 . 2/8/2017
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