Reviews for Instability
Moonpiper chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
Glad I decided to read this story. Well written. Will continue on to the next installment.
Celestial Access chapter 3 . 7/9/2009
D'aaw The ending's so nice (;w;)

Loved the chapter! Hope to see an update soon~
song1486 chapter 3 . 7/9/2009
Yay!:) I am really enjoying this story, I'm so glad that you're going to be doing more for it. I love your characterization, it's dead on. You're also making Sam's 'freak out' totally believable('cause really you can't get yourself killed in the middle of a giant droid death match and walk out the other side just fine). Keep up the good work; especially since I haven't spotted any major spelling or grammer errors. (Sorry, kind of OCD 'bout that) ;)
Ashana chapter 3 . 7/9/2009
Yay, long story! I love the fast updates, but real life does get in the way. It comes and hits you over the head and drags you out the door if you ignore it too long. I love the texting part, very creative. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Dazja chapter 3 . 7/9/2009
Awesome
Floral-Foxes chapter 3 . 7/9/2009
Oh my gosh! Thanks so much for pointing out that you did indeed have a third chapter! XD I don't know why I missed it, heh. Stupid me...but again an EXCELLENT chapter! Can't wait for the next chappie!
RedTieAffair chapter 3 . 7/9/2009
awee, a totally heartwarming chapter

all thanks to bumblebee.

and i'm sure we can live with not having constant reviewss

go out and enjoy life

maybe you'll find a yellow camaro waiting for you ;)

RTA
falconsblade chapter 3 . 7/9/2009
that was awesome. that seriously felt REAL. trauma can really f*k u up inside. more please *puppy dog eyes*
KnightQueen chapter 3 . 7/9/2009
Herm, not to knock anyone, but I never understood the atraction of writing AllSpark!Sam or Bot!Sam in the least. But then there's alot of TF-Fandom I don't fully understand (attraction-wise). No offense folks.

That aside, I am really enjoying this story. Its nice to see a story focusing on the ramifications of a situation like the Sam went through to save Prime (and by extension, the humance race), gives the character a little more depth, aftermath-wise.

I seriously hope someone "accidentally" shoves Galloway off the edge of something. that dude is a A-Hole. Seriously.

Sakura123
Shadowgirl119 chapter 3 . 7/9/2009
Wow...amazing story, so far-please update soon.
Kara Sullivan chapter 3 . 7/9/2009
Wow! So this morning, I just thought hm, wonder if there's any Transformers: ROTR fic out there yet, so I went to the category and found this. I have to say, I'm blown away. I absolutely love the interaction between Sam and the Autobots in both movies, particularly Bumblebee and Optimus. This story looks like it's going in a direction I'm going to love! I can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks!

Kara
Floral-Foxes chapter 2 . 7/9/2009
Oh wow...When I clicked on this I was expecting some Sam angst (never is enough of that) but this way better than I imagined. You are such a good writer! I envy you greatly! These are the kind of stories I want my writing to imitate but I can never seem to be good enough. When Sam entered the room where the Autobots where I felt my heart start racing. I love the way you are describing Sam's feelings. I think that's what he really should've been acting like when the movie was over. When they ended it seemed too fake...(I mean he died and then he's ok?). But really, excellent work! And oh a cliff-hanger! I dislike cliff-hangers T_T Please update soon!
GirlWaterShaman chapter 3 . 7/9/2009
*has been spazzing and squeeing this entire chapter* yay for more bee/sam moments! *flails a bit* keep it up! :D
auburnmaven chapter 3 . 7/9/2009
Yay! Still awesome!

Once again your Bee/Sam interactions were heartbreakingly emotional. I can't wait to see what you do with Optimus!

Although, where are Lennox and Epps? Will they make an appearance?

Looking forward to your next update!
dragonwitch250 chapter 3 . 7/9/2009
Another great chapter! Bee is so sweet! I am wondering how Optimus will help. Can't wait for the next update!
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