Reviews for Instability |
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![]() ![]() ![]() this is great I look forward to more |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg i love this! you write them all so well : ) please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hm, this is very good. I look forward to the next chapter. I would have a mental breakdown too if I had been involved in some giant, alien, robot war that I didn't want to take part of unless Destiny decided to fiddle with my life like a puppet on strings. I hope everything works out good for Sam in the end. Although I wonder what kind of role Optimus plays in all of this. Oh well, I guess I'm gonna have to find out anyway. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...man... you made me cry. I really dislike emotional stuff (because of this reason... sob/laugh). But beautiful/ Really. You are brilliant, amazingly talented at capturing these feelings. Sam almost hysteria to what has happened and the conversation between Bee and him (my god it was text message) how on earth did you manage to capture that kind of emotion? (Damn u i hate crying/sobbing mess I am right now. I swear its because of this cold). Ok before I sound crazy. Thank you so much for sharing it has definitely made my day. thankyouthankyouthankyou oh and I look forward to any updates, anytime, don't care how long or short. I just ugh... yeah... ok I'll shut up now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is REALLY good. I look forward to more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. I'm kind of speechless right now. But, I'll try to work around it. :] A few things: 1. I LOVE long stories. And I love that this is going to be a long story. I think it is going to be absolutely fabulous and can't wait. 2. The "conversation" between Sam and Bee almost made me cry. You portray their relationship beautifully and (according to my perception of the movies) accurately. 3. Thank heavens someone got a few good hits on Galloway. Sheesh. I wanted to punch that guys lights out during the movie. UGH. 4. Can't wait for more interaction with the Autobots! Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() Oh, wow, I'm so hooked on this. Great job. Loved all three chapters, I feel so sorry for all that poor Sam's going through an this last chapter really had me choked up. I can't wait to see more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow... now this is a dark fic... *grumbles* if i'd been there, i'd given sam couple of good smackings and send him hugging the metal floor for insulting bumblebee so. be afraid afraid of 'cons, go out of your mind and scream your lungs out if you like, but never doubt a friendship. *huffs* |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good so far i believe i am going to be watching this story , really good work and its cool to see a unique story . |
![]() ![]() ![]() it is true that long period of time in a closed parameter will drive you up the walls. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Never fear! I happen to enjoy very long stories. I liked Bee and Sam's text conversation. |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay to long story! Poor sam, but I'm so glad he beat up galloway I hated him. Can't wait to see where you will take this. *buckles in for the ride* |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was amazing before, but wow, this chapter was SO GOOD. I don't blame Sam for his freaking out, and I'm absolutely glad he hates Galloway. I hate him too! Him losing it in the bathroom/janitor closet was sad enough, but then Bee saying he'd do anything, even go to Pluto to get a rock, for Sam not to be afraid of him - I almost cried! So sweet! 3 Bee & Sam! Looking forward to more, especially since you said there will be double helpings of angst :D Oh, and I'm TOTALLY loving the review below by Skittles the Sugar Fairy! AllSpark!Sam technically IS canon now, haha. However, this story will be wonderful with or without that :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome, just awesome :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol, but allspark Sam is cannon now, CANNON! XD; Awesome chapters, been up way later than I should finishing this one. I have to say I REALLY like the freak outs. People, real average people cant honestly go through half that and come waltzing out perfectly normal. The texting was ADORABLE and I cant wait to see where this will all end up going. |