Reviews for Instability |
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Ashana chapter 1 . 7/7/2009 Aww! I love it so far! I love the details, and how you dive into Sam's mind. The puppet part kinda freaked me out - the sign of a great writer is that they make you feel emotion! I can't wait to read the second part, it's going to be great! |
sexyredhead chapter 1 . 7/7/2009 Wow. This is so powerfully and beautifully written. I got chills once or twice reading through this. Excellent work. I have been looking for a fic like this, but haven't been able to find anything that I liked. But THIS. This is amazing. I can't wait to read more. Great line: "Well, as normal as could reasonably be expected when...your best friends were thirty foot tall alien robots that had just finished beating the shit out of another group of alien robots to try to stop the sun from being destroyed. So yeah. Normal." |
xxnuttynicxx chapter 1 . 7/7/2009 Can't wait to see more. |
PadfootRawr chapter 1 . 7/7/2009 Very, Very, VERY wonderfully written. I absolutely LOVED it. You set the scene perfectly, and gave a really good insight into Sam's mind, and feelings. Can't wait for the second chapter, i tell you now! |
MoonstarWorld chapter 1 . 7/7/2009 A great insight into what Sam was feeling after they left the flight deck. |
Shinouq chapter 1 . 7/7/2009 looks interesting! Can't wait for more! |
RedTieAffair chapter 1 . 7/6/2009 WOW, you're story is totally AMAZING i've been wonder when someone was gonna go and explore the aftermath of the fallen and i'm so glad you did awesome job! RTA |