|Reviews for Normality|
| spookysister7 chapter 2 . 12/29/2009
| Lutricity chapter 2 . 7/20/2009
she is lucky! she gets to sleep with the doctor!
| Lutricity chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
Wow! that was really awesome having the doctor save her like that, Molto Bene!
| Lizzle09 chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
| ianto-harkness chapter 2 . 7/11/2009
I'm a sucker for that storyline. :D
You did a good job with it and I know that over time and with a beta, your stories will become even better. Keep up the great work!
| Infusiion chapter 2 . 7/11/2009
I know if I was sleeping with the Doctor I'd never have nightmares. :D
As for a Beta, I'd be happy to look over the spelling/grammar stuff for you, if you can't find anyone else. Although, I sometimes have enough trouble writing my own stories, so you're on your own with the endings. :P
Anyway, well done. Nicely wrapped up.
| Infusiion chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
I think there is a lot of potential for more chapters here (in fact, I think the way you've written it, it feels incomplete just being a oneshot), particularly with that last line - that's just screaming for something bad to happen to Rose again. :P
Not sure what you could do, maybe Rose could get stolen from the Doctor, or something like that, and you could put more emphasis on his feelings for her, and what he would risk/the extent he would go to for her safety, I don't know - you'll figure that out for yourself if you decide to write more.
But yes, I think more chapters would be good. You've written a good starter here, and like I mentioned before, that last sentence or two adds a nice dose of suspense, and a hint at more to come (even if you hadn't planned on writing more, it's just the way it feels to me). :)
I look forward to seeing what you decide to do.