Reviews for The Lavi Syndrome
Athena Keating-Thomas chapter 3 . 1/7/2012
This was a very cute idea. You have some grammar/word choice issues, but your intention is still clear. :)
Angr chapter 3 . 8/15/2010
That was such a nice chapter and the story too, love it!
Rincon-kun chapter 3 . 8/7/2010
First I must tell you this doesn’t seem to be in the mood you were in as you wrote it XD ‘Nuff said about that XD

After that, am going to the actual review:

I liked the wording, I liked the confusion, I liked the characters. I liked the introspections as I always did all the way through the fic and they made me laugh (since both are so effing paranoid and emo –in a funny way- in them XD). I also find it interesting that –if some have had the chance to chat with you- you can pretty much tell this was written by you, since many of the expressions and dialogs and narrator’s inserts are things you use, dear XD

I’d second or third the idea of you keeping this on, but since I know how hard it was for you to finish this chapter, I’m not so sure if I should ask you to do it. It was pretty much fun, though. And I really did enjoy it as you have no idea. You made me laugh, made me “awww” and made me smile as I read. It was a nice final chapter and, I insist, it doesn’t reflect your mood as you wrote it XD

I’d also choose a favorite line, but I certainly can’t, for there are so many things I liked in the whole fic that I would end up copying & pasting it here again, and I don’t want to do that XD

I found this pretty much amusing and might think of printing, translating and lending it to my friends if I have the chance XD

Conclusion: I LOVED IT! *epic glomp*

Thanks so much for finishing this. You’re amazing, sweetheart :D


PS: Btw, the cake thingy had a bit of a meaning for me since I am baking a cake at the moment XD Just a random fact I wanted to share ;D
Saga of Eternal Rain chapter 3 . 8/7/2010
That was a wonderful ending to that chapter and I REALLY HOPE THERE'LL BE ANOTHER ONE because I wanna know why they were all hunting for Lavi and what Kanda will do about it. _ Great, great, great chapter, which was long and interesting! Please continue!
marufu-chan chapter 3 . 8/7/2010
Great chapter I loved this. keep up the awesome work! n.n
Yuu13 chapter 3 . 8/7/2010
AHAHAHAHAHAHA- *takes deep breath* HAHAHAHAHA *dies*

Oh god, that was FUCKING AWESOME!

I love the ending! It was awesome how Lavi heard him!

Altough I'm a little confused as why everyone is hunting him.. I'LL WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! No matter how long it takes!
Madarao754 chapter 2 . 6/23/2010
Kawaii-Neko1246 chapter 2 . 9/30/2009
omg! loved it... hey i hope i get to read the next one it seem like its gonna be a good one... hehe nice!
Kawaii-Neko1246 chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
wow.. hehe , i loved the chapter it was very interesting... i sure hope to read the others hehe good job
Kuro49 chapter 2 . 9/25/2009
How can I everyone else's works and not yours XDD Well, let me tell you, I am not those people after your heels with weapons pointed at your head, I am the one with the net ready to pounce on you and drag you back to the computer -hearts?- XD

Kanda has such a funny reaction to Rabi's whole existence XD And yes, the way you write him entertains me to no end XDD But will Rabi just give up and leave? Hm... but at least this cliffhanger was better than the last, at least I won't be ready to tie you to a chair to keep you from running away XD so I forgive you -angel smile-

Hearts you plenty~~ V I look forward to next chapter ;DD

Niza chapter 2 . 9/21/2009
please tell me there will be another chapter! he can't just let Lavi leave.
Morphine Dementia chapter 2 . 9/10/2009
So, I've read this and I think I've definitely read this before...and probably didn't have the balls to review, haha, well that makes us even doesn't it. XD


Well, what to say - I really liked it. It's just...well, really amusing to see Kanda that way, and he WOULD be acting that way if his body was giving out such reactions for someone, because he's clueless like that. XD Also, the emphasizing of 'perfect' while talking about him really makes him look more of an ass than he does, but I can forgive that. XD And too bad, I would have almost loved to see Lavi carry him...ah well, not everything at once, neh? Nice, funny interactions. And poor, poor guys. D:

DON'T DROP THIS. CONTINUE. THAT IS AN ORDER. (*SHOT*) Nice work, really, AND it adds to the list of FFnet fics that aren't Blasphemy! In other words, perfect, haha.
woulsky chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
Hi :) I read. Good story~ 3

Sweet and cute! 33
Tossino chapter 2 . 8/1/2009
This chapter was slightly more messy than the previous one... I think I can see now that you're more of an artist than a writer. XD No offense, of course, but I guess that none is taken. It's not badly written, but I can see it's not your forte. xP

It was a good read, anyway. It's a great way to amuse yourself and bide some time. The confusion and misintepretions makes it somewhat genuine and sweet. Some parts could be better, and some paragraphs could maybe be a bit shorter too. When they're too long my head starts spinning...

But it was a good chapter. :3 Hurry up with the next one! Or I'll threaten you again.
Countershocked chapter 2 . 8/1/2009
Another great chapter Senpai _

You know I can't give a helpful review (What have we been talking about on MSN for the past hour xD)but I must say I think the structure is excellent. Like how a story should be...

Lavi and Kanda have a lovely chemistry between them, without them going OOC.

Congratz Senpai D

x Aka-chan x
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