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luz nocturna chapter 8 . 5/13/2017
Por el rayo de Zeus la barba de Odin y la sabiduría de Budapest seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla seguíla
Por favor me encanta me encanta si la seguis hago un fanarts de Hai Li y Aang si siiiiiiii bueno nos bemos chauuuu besho besho
Guest chapter 8 . 10/20/2013
This story is really cool! You might wanna make some of your sentences shorter, though. Some of them kinda go on for a bit and there should be a period in the middle. And Katara is kind of OOC. But other then that, it's really awesome. Keep it up! :)
Guest chapter 8 . 6/11/2013
i can't wait to see the next capter
aarinisreading chapter 6 . 5/6/2013
Ummmm...Toph does realize Cornelia isn't an earthbender? Right?
aarinisreading chapter 5 . 5/6/2013
If a guy that came up to me and said that I'd be creeped out. Just sayin'.
Marqueza chapter 8 . 1/13/2013
This is really awesome! Please update: I need to know how this ends!
Guest chapter 8 . 1/9/2013
Such a shame you have discontinued writing this, it was just getting better :( you are a great writer and I hope you would continue x
Arthur chapter 8 . 12/14/2012
I love it, can't wait for your next chapter!
ShadowKissedGallagherGirlLexia chapter 8 . 9/27/2012
you MUST update
is it on hiatus? its been two years!
Foreverabookcritic310020 chapter 8 . 9/11/2012
Please upload the next one. It's a good story. It may have been years but I think it still has a chance. I'll follow it. :)
Val Marsal chapter 8 . 8/7/2012
Hey! good story! don't let it PLEASE :)
bs13 chapter 8 . 6/22/2012
Please keep writing! Dont leave me hanging!
Dream Dragoness chapter 8 . 3/6/2011
Holy Crap this is good. Can't wait to read what happens next. :)
PEJP Bengtzone chapter 8 . 11/12/2010
If only Aang could come along Cornelia and Hay Lin to Kandrakar.
Sheillia chapter 8 . 11/12/2010
it was good very good, could be a bit longer though
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