|Reviews for Ever Ever After|
| jen chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
I'm sure.. you... worked on this... some.
Seriously. Try again.
I'm not flaming - I mean I'm not a perfect writer either, but this story lacks substance, a substantial plot, and the grammar and the spelling and... my eyes hurt.
I'd say to try again, maybe get a beta? or someone to help you work on... this.