Reviews for Ever Ever After
jen chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
I'm sure.. you... worked on this... some.

But no.

Seriously. Try again.

I'm not flaming - I mean I'm not a perfect writer either, but this story lacks substance, a substantial plot, and the grammar and the spelling and... my eyes hurt.

I'd say to try again, maybe get a beta? or someone to help you work on... this.