Reviews for bolwing
vkgirl11 chapter 1 . 11/18/2009
HA HA HA HA! THAT WAS SO FUNNY HOW YUUKI GOT 300 AS HER SCORE! I LOVE IT!
Delta Sierra chapter 1 . 7/18/2009
A lot of grammar errors, but an interesting idea. I wish that you would represent bowling a little better as well. (I'm a bowler who averages 140 or so, so this would be really funny if you put more detail into it)

Good idea, although the grammar leaves something to be desired and the lack of detail makes it kind of uninteresting.

Some side notes, since 300 is the best score, I don't think that you should put it like 'it's her best'. I like that they all had really good scores compared to the 30's though. (wish that I would get my 200 game soon!)
Refrigerator-Burn chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
i love it! aido and ichigo are my favorites besides zero! aido is #1! anyway, i cant till the next one. the story is randomn and unexpected and it makes me love it even more! im interested in seeing how the math tutoring works out!