|Reviews for Hidden in Glass|
| Guest chapter 16 . 3/20/2015
Hold up, Sam is a skilled hand to hand combat fighter and a leader, arguably the strongest/toughest character of the group, but she displays none of these qualities throughout the story. She gets easily captured, runs away from her problems, is really insecure and becomes pop a singer. None of these reflect the characteristics of the strong female character that she is. Actually, I don't think she once did anything that reflects this. Also that whole anime dance thing kinda took away from the story, and it was really hard to suspend my disbelief at that moment. The story was decent? all in all but to tell you the truth I don't think you can write an ending that actually makes sense given the events that transpired in the story.
| Soul-x-Thief chapter 16 . 6/6/2012
OMFG! WHY DID YOU HAVE TO DO A CLIFFHANGER! WHY! I AM TELLING YOU I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY! IT"S THE BEST MBC STORY I EVER READ!
| Skychild101 chapter 16 . 6/30/2011
... you left us off at a... CLIFFHANGER! HOW DARE YOU! THIS IS JUST THE STORY I WAS LOOKING FOR! PLEEEAAASSSEEEEE UPPPPDAATE!
Chris: are you sure that's the story you're looking for?
Me: Chris! *looks at him with a death glare, he gulps*
Me: YOU! HOW DARE YOU! YOU ARE GONNA COME WITH ME! *starts to walk*
And all you could hear was yelling and shouting and and... crashing sounds.
Cathy, Danny and SAm looks at the door that was almost going to break down.
Danny: You know... Chris isn't going to survive in there...
Sam: Way to state the obvious, Captain Obvious! *three of them looks at the other* GREAT STORY! PLEASE UPDATE!
| Dixxy chapter 16 . 4/3/2011
Hello IHKF !
Your story definitely is one of the most enjoyable i've read so far ! I like the idea of Sam moving out and making new friends while her original ones are looking for her.
And the way you brought up that twist and turn, when Judy actually reaveals herself as a dark figure... that's just too great !
But while the plot was very good, what astonished me the most is your exellent mastery of language and the "width and depth" of your glossary, among which is your regular use of circumlocutions / periphrases to avoid always repeating the firstnames and bring some diversity in it. Man (or girl, if you're one...;) , you really are stunning at writing : of all the MBC stories i've read, yours definitely is the one best-written ! I wish most of the users would have that skill writing you obviously have !
I'm kinda speechless expressing how much i admire your style. FFigure out i happen tovhave exactly similar mastery in my own language, French, and i humbly think i'm
doing quite good in English, since i've often been told i cold have been a native speaker of it. But enough of me, really ! You're the star here ! ;P
Your plot also was very catchy and i must say i almost never got annoyed reading your great work. The only thing that bothered me a little was that "a-tad-too-widespread"
song thing. Fun in the beginning, but then i felt overwhelmed with it. Hey, this makes me deduce you're probably a girl, coz the few other users to put songs in their short stories were girls too.
Anway, that's the only lil' "down" IMO in your otherwise excellent story. I've added it to my favorites, of course. And i'll check what else you may have written on MBC. (Sorry, i'm only MBC or PhineasandFerb interested, since theey're my fav' shows : the rest doesn't trigger my attention). But that'll honestly be a delight to read again from you, as you definitely have the talent to become one writer for real. Ever thought of making it your job in the future ? ;)
| lulu101 chapter 16 . 7/11/2010
what does he tell her? tell me tell me tell me!
| CathyRulz4Ever chapter 7 . 6/15/2010
Oh gosh I'm laughing so much in the beginning! XD
LOL, and also when they're with the nurse!
LOL! Especially loved reading that fighting between Jason and Amy again!
| CathyRulz4Ever chapter 6 . 6/15/2010
Haha, even reading this chapter again makes me laugh again!
| onpu-san chapter 16 . 4/8/2010
| Manny-Elaine chapter 16 . 1/11/2010
awesome! what was this song again? ]
| Manny the Master chapter 15 . 1/11/2010
Hey, what was teh v ery last song in this chappie? can you reply to this by sengin a PM to Againstshipper3? thanks!
| lol chapter 16 . 9/29/2009
you can't leave it there if your stuck ask people to review ideas
| random chapter 16 . 9/27/2009
please please update
i have been waiting for ages for you to update
I absoluley love this story it's one of my favourites
please please update soon
| rOcKeR4LiiF3 chapter 16 . 9/17/2009
Ok this is an awsome story...dude you rock
UPLOAD PLZ UPLOAD UPLOAD...
10987277 UPLOAD WORDS LATER
THIS STORY ROCKS!
| love is killing me chapter 16 . 9/13/2009
OMG! YOUR STORY IS AAMMAAZZIINNGG! lol please up date soon :)
| dollygirl123 chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
This story is just fantastic :D I like it so much! You're a genius please write the next chapter soon ;D Thank you! :D