Reviews for BROKEN TRUST
Thorilian chapter 8 . 3/28
Please continue
Beth5572 chapter 8 . 6/22/2010
I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too.

Thank you,

BlackRose-FlowerofDeath chapter 8 . 6/10/2010
Will you post who adopted the story?

the dark euphie chapter 8 . 6/6/2010
that last chapter was brilliant all i could do was laugh.
Kira Kyuu chapter 7 . 2/19/2010
Pretty good so far! Please update! Even though it's been four months. . .
excessivelyperky chapter 7 . 2/16/2010
Sorry to hear about your laptop. Hmm, I wonder where that Time-turner from the third year went...they haven't had the Ministry Raid yet, and maybe Fletcher can nick them one?
excessivelyperky chapter 6 . 2/16/2010
Good chapter (hope that Snape will get to sleep sometime before the war is over-considering he has to please Dumbledore, spy for Voldemort, teach Harry special lessons, and never mind the rest of the school-where did that Time-turner go?).
excessivelyperky chapter 5 . 2/16/2010
A third side? I thought that was the Ministry (you know, the lovely people who are such friends with Dementors). A fourth side would be more to the point. Good chapter.
excessivelyperky chapter 4 . 2/16/2010
Ok, Harry has a glamour thing going-that makes sense. Love the covering argument that explains why Snape and Sirius and Remus was there for so long.
excessivelyperky chapter 3 . 2/16/2010
Um...and nobody is noticing blood on Harry from the cuts that have opened? Lovely people, the Order...
excessivelyperky chapter 2 . 2/16/2010
Well...I don't think Harry would be standing and walking about on a broken leg. I've done the sprained ankle bit, and even that makes it quite hard. Another good chapter, though.

As for the blood wards, Voldemort has some of Harry's blood now...
excessivelyperky chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
Good start. Of course, canon!Harry never thinks about these things (and neither does canon!Snape, unfortunately, though he did save Harry's life a few times already). And given how Snape was treated in PoA (did his concussion ever get treated?), Harry is probably quite right in thinking he doesn't like Dumbledore's manipulations, either.
BlackRose-FlowerofDeath chapter 7 . 11/13/2009
Hm very interesting indeed! I can't wait to see what happens next!

njferrell chapter 7 . 9/27/2009
Well, that was an eye opener for Harry first thing in the morning. Now if Snape would just join the two...Then, Harry can walk in all three of them...
ams71080 chapter 7 . 9/27/2009
I like this so far.

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